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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
I’ll just draw something and you guys tell me what to change
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 20 hours ago
Okay. Maybe the gymnasium is a separate building in the center of the back gardens, then. We could integrate the gardens so they sort of surround the gymnasium (hedge bushes and paths and the like), and the tiltyard is walled off so the gym isn’t spilling into the tended grounds. Plus the stables are there… somewhere…
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
The stables would need room for paddocks and training yards, so it would be a pretty good size in and of itself. We could say the gymnasium is behind the school, and then the stables are behind that, and there are gardens on both sides of the main school complex? Idk.
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
Hmm. Maybe a separate building? Like maybe they originally had a big hall inside the school, but quickly realized it was way too small for all their needs, so that hall is now a music/orchestra/choir room? They are teaching future monarchs and nobles that will need to lead armies, fight duels, and who knows what else each country…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
Sorry if no one wants it to be this hyper specific, but I think it might make roleplaying easier in the long run. If the boys will be in the gymnasium a lot
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
This is a really huge gymnasium, but it makes perfect sense for a bunch of chaotic boys.
A few questions. Should this gymnasium take up pretty much all of the back of the academy? Should it be in the main feature back there or should we put it to the east or west side? Or is it completely separate from the main building?
the path from the main…
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
That is a great idea. I’d much appreciate a visual, even if it’s just a basic “there’s stuff here, and here, and here” type thingy
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
So I imagined the gymnasium itself as a huge, high ceilinged building with skylights, all sorts of equipment (mats, bars, climbing wall, a court for various ball games or tennis, a wrestling square, and a few fencing strips), and a door to an enclosed indoor archery range (as that would likely be safer than an outdoor range where there’s more…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
Obviously I can’t draw anything skilled. But I need the digital equivalent of a scribble on a whiteboard
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 21 hours ago
I really like the idea of setting the gym so it’s half inside, half outside, with the open doors to the courtyard.
How about I try to do a quick drawing of what you described and post it so we have a visual? And we can add/change things as needed.
Having a basic visual would probably be helpful even if the gym was simpler, b…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 23 hours ago
Callum
Callum woke up dizzy. His ears buzzed. Hot water soaked his shirt and knees, and he slowly found himself to be on the floor in a puddle of water.
Oh, right. The chef had deigned to speak to him.
His face flushed with embarrassment, and he clutched his head, trying to regain his sense of balance. He stumbled back to his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 23 hours ago
Whoops.
LeQoi
The child fell with unceremonious speed. LeQoi looked down at the crumpled figure on the floor and sighed patiently. It wasn’t everyday someone swooned at his feet, especially not as a natural response.
Perhaps the child could stay around.
“Let me know when he awakes.” He waved a long boned hand to the wide eyed…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 23 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon
Y’all can create and control any professors you want! The only ones I should control by myself are the ones I create
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 23 hours ago
Yeah. I think Nick sometimes fall asleep because of other emotions, but it’s mostly laughter.
I pictured Callum to faint whenever he’s surprised, shocked, or frightened. And it’s a fainting spell, not sleeping, so he normally wakes up right away. It’s just blacking out for a short spell.
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
I just realize Callum is basically Nicholas Benedict. I am so unoriginal. I didn’t even notice until now
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
Callum
The other scullery children went quiet. Perhaps they were all tired of conversation and just wanted to finish working.
Callum shrugged inwardly. It wasn’t as if he knew any of them. He doused a pile of plates with soap, a melody playing in his head to pass the time.
A voice spoke behind Callum, without any warning. It was Chef L…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
(also, that was mean to talk about food. Now I’m hungry) XD
Good! Maybe go eat something? XP
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
Just so you know, if LeQoi approaches this boy suddenly without warning, he might faint
Hmm, noted. =|
LeQoi
Serving maids dipped in and out of the hall entry, pitchers and teapots in hand. No black haired child darted among them.
LeQoi stepped smoothly around stovetops and scurrying chefs. Dishes piled high on counters waiting,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
Just so you know, if LeQoi approaches this boy suddenly without warning, he might faint
Callum
There were a ton of dishes to be cleaned. Callum dunked a pot into the scalding hot water and started scrubbing. Steam rose, and he wiped the condensation off his forehead with his free arm.
Hopefully he could get everything done and take a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days ago
Ari btw is probably sitting on top of the climbing wall in the gymnasium. Likely giving the safety supervisor a heart attack.
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