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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Sebastian
Seb’s eyebrows raised even further, until they disappeared into his bangs entirely. “You obviously cannot pick up on nonverbal cues.”
Jakob appeared so livid at the unfazed look on the boy’s face, that his brothers shifted closer, silently pleading for peace.
Seb opened his mouth a few times a…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
YUS SEBBY!!
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whaley replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Yeah, I usually get easily annoyed with depressed characters, but Kaladin somehow didn’t get on my nerves. So I would be agreeing with you strongly if it weren’t for that, funnily enough.
Oh yeah, I can see that working too. I’m not picky with the exact moment a character triumphs over something internal, just as long as I can tell what…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I am in the middle of OB as I speak, so you probably won’t see me on here until I finish RoW.
The only thing I have to say right now is that I found the first book most memorable. That’s probably because it’s the first one, and therefore the first time I saw the world. But another strength I’d like to add, which is continued in the other books…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@Godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6
Umm, I am not sure where we left off yeah, but I’m sure we can figure something out!
Do either of you want to RP first? Because if not then I definitely can
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whaley replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
XD Thank you ❤️
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@calyhuge luv it! So long as it doesn’t bother his dormies XD but I doubt it will
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whaley replied to the topic My Fantasy Universe: Celestiar in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Are you one of the Sanderson fans? 😄 I noticed your magic system and enjoyed giving it a look
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whaley started the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
So… yeah.
See title.
I can’t talk about this particular world on my Chrysanthemum thread, because it would go against my perfectionism. Instead, I have started this special little thread just for Seb’s universe alone. (Although technically his story is the combination of all my different worlds smashed together, so, call it what you…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Paxton
Paxton nodded, glancing around the hall. This wasn’t exactly the best place to stay…his brothers could come upon them at any moment!
Riker stood, gently lifting Paxton out of his lap and helping him stand. He put out his hand, smiling.
“Ready?”
Paxton gripped his backpack, staring at Riker’s hand for a mom…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I am anxiously (excitedly XD) awaiting Jakob’s reaction/response to Seb 🤣
@whalekeeper @freedomwritee76
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Paxton
Paxton stared at the bruise Bucky had revealed, eyes widening a bit. He looked from Bucky to the blonde standing behind him, and then Erich, and then the other boy with them…
And then Riker.
Did…did they have more marks like Bucky’s bruise?
Marks like Paxton had?
They…did understand…
Paxton stared on…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
WE GOT HIM Y’ALL
We’re so close – so close to PHASE REHABILITATION
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whaley replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 1 month ago
Yeah ❤️ I chuckle every time I listen to it
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whaley replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 1 month ago
I’ve listened to three NF songs (liked Trauma best), and a few TOP (Heathens best, that one’s WAY too catchy). They’re definitely useful for backstory songs, but I can only listen to them for so long before my mood goes dark 😂
It’s so fun when you find songs like that!! They can be the randomest thing EVER, but still f…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 1 month ago
Idk if this helps at all (our stories are really different, so what works for me might not for you) but I like to use the in between parts for little bits of dialogue or setting to help develop characters. For instance, instead of using a major plot event to show a character is nervous, It might just be a single line they say to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h ahh I like that!
Paxton
Paxton fiddled with one of his backpack’s zippers, not meeting Riker, or any of the others’ eyes.
He needed…wanted the help…but could he really trust them with everything?
With…this?
He’d…he’d never let anyone see the welts, or marks, or bruises before…
No one…ever.
Tha…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
@whalekeeper Yuuup XD so that’ll definitely be later 😂 and his brain will probably be like “why am I laughing…?” XD XD
meanwhile everyone else: AWWW XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
”I think I’m supposed to be learning”
😂😂
Ah… 😂😉 He’ll have to get used to being touched first, tho. Baby steps.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 3 years, 1 month ago
VESSELS IS SOOOO GOOD!!!!
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