Folith-Feolin

@freedomwriter76

They look great!

Aww, I didn’t know Rueben was such a shorty XD

And wait, pics are back up??

@freedomwriter76

Ikr? 😀

@whalekeeper

Ok this is actually super interesting…

I don’t outright write God into my stories, but I have no problem with those who do. I just think it’s really hard to get it right, so I would rather display my faith by themes.

I don’t think you even necessarily need a sacrificial death in your story in order to imitate Jesus. There are w…

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@whalekeeper

Could you tell?!! 😮😮 You’re spot on! He’s to scared to join them, so he convinces himself it just isn’t him. 😉 but yeah he really knows what he wants and is trying to avoid it.

Heeyyy

So you’ve changed it a lot then!! At least from what I remember of your previous work XD And I like how clear-cut the heroes and villains are. Gives you a lot of solid plot material to work with.

1. Actually I want to make a topic on this, which I will tag you for 😉 Maybe it will help you find an answer.

2. Well in a lot of superhero…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Aww, those scenes were so sweet XDXD I love it, girl. Honestly if you decide Tauren actually wants to explore – but is hiding it behind his quiet observer self – and if you made some scenes where it’s clear he’s beginning to make those decisions, I would believe it 😉

@freedomwriter76

It does look better!!

@freedomwriter76

The blonde-haired man smirked. “Is that all you can take, Jew?” he sneered, rolling up his brown sleeves.

Leon leaned against the wall.

He wouldn’t give up so easily.

Leon pushed to his feet. “I’m never done.”

“I can do this all day” 😉

perhaps some resemblance?

I liked Leon’s section better in the first draft (the word ‘…[Read more]

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6

Not sure if the picture will work, and sorry this took so long, but allow me to introduce Ezrian!

Full name: Ezrian Se’vaantian

Age: 22

Description: Tall, with deep tan skin. He has dark hair and eyes. He has strange mind abilities that in his case allow him to steal memories (He won’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, it’s the cheapest school in my state too!! 😀

@keilah-h

IKR? I agree with like everything you said, except how does your mom think it’s lame? XD

Self love is my current favorite out of the soundtrack, but I like Mona Lisa too. what about you?

Oh yeah, spot holes is super eerie.

@freedomwriter76

I really like that idea! It kinda adds another layer to his dad, I would roll with it if I were you! (I mean if it works with the rest of the story)

Also I just visited a college where we live that has a design program, and it was really interesting! It’s a branch of a larger one out of town. It’s just in a normal business…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Hmmmmm…you’re really giving me something to think about XD

Lol something to think about was my intention, I hope you didn’t mind me randomly saying all that XD

The Bois’ father does have his moments of love, showing the old him that kinda faded after his first wife left, and it is POSSIBLE that he may have at least a semi-…

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@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

Sebastian

Seb stared back. “If your sanity is dead, talk about the weather. Now, please, answer my question.”

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Clement furrows his eyebrows.

“Conceal the casualty? Excuse me, what?” He stares at the young child wide eyed.

@freedomwriter76

I just realized something about your wip! (the one with the boi’s)

You can use some of this if you want, but don’t feel obligated.

In almost all of the writing I have read with the boi’s that relates to abuse, it tends to revolve around emotions of anger (for the oldest, right?) sometimes a sense of abandonment, and physical…[Read more]

Sebastian

Seb shrugged, staring up at a chandelier as they passed. “I haven’t actively looked for an audience since… oh, the last time I sang in the shower. The matter lies in that, whether one appears or not, there is an automatic behavioral pattern set. Even when I am all alone, I must follow a melody. As if I had an invisible audience, if…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper

“And that isn’t just me trying to sound independent. I genuinely only mean to impress, oh… ninety percent of the time.”

Clement smirks. “To impress? So you stay with a group so you can have an audience?”

@mineralizedwritings

Sebastian

Seb caught up, still a few paces behind the others, and raised an eyebrow at Clement. “With all due respect, sir, I never asked to be part of this group. Nor do I need any protection.”

At Clements bemused expression, he added, “And that isn’t just me trying to sound independent. I genuinely only mean to impress,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh ok… I might have some ideas later!

@smiley @freedom

Oh yeah I need to know what the ships are too.

Are Bucky and Yelena just going to be like platonic friends, or are they so brainwashed that they simply see each-other as an ally? Or something else?