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@freedomwriter76 @whalekeeper @hybridlore @keilah-h

I drew Bucky as  chibi with glitter pens 🥹

@rae

I’m pretty busy with school and stuff rn so I don’t have time to read this much writing, but if you ever post a small snippet or interaction you want me to see do tag me!  🙂

@freedomwriter76

I can tell the second version has a better flow! Nice work!

I actually remember reading the first version of that like a long time ago lol

Sarcasmfiend

Bwhahaha this is wonderful 🤣😂

@freeomwriter76

If it’s okay, I just assumed the parents greeted my family 🙂

@everyone

When I mention the group of kids, it can be literally anyone, I left it vague so if anyone wants to interact with my characters, the floor’s open.

Moon

The Krats were swiftly ushered into a spacious, refined parlor.

As Moon followed his expressionless bro…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Same XD

Another thing is I think it’s really important to give your character an identity that does not involve their hurt. Who are they, what do they want, and what is their goal? Their past and experiences can effect the answers to those questions, but hurt should never define a person.

What Min said here is exactly what I would say. You should never m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

No it’s ok! That was totally my bad 🙂

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I jumped to conclusions : P

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds…

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@savannah_grace2009

Girl I feel so bad about that now, I just tried to give advice on a character when you didn’t ask for it 🤦🏻‍♀️it just really sounded like Ottoline’s situation 😭

@savannah_grace2009

Oops! Sorry about the assumption, I hope it was helpful in some way! 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Oh also (I’m sorry, if you can’t tell I have a lot of info on the topic to share) if you look up what ptsd is like you’ll know more about those flashback reactions. I have no idea how real they are but I see them all the times in books, and books generally aren’t a good source of reference.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh and I saw you said you needed help with how they would act after trauma and abuse, so I’ll add on a little more.

Everyone I think will have a slightly different reaction, but seeing as it’s a relative, it depends on what their relationship was like before this started. Did it start when she was young? If so, she likely…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This is a great question!

I totally understand the thing with your parents. I don’t show my work to my parents or many people either, just because I don’t know what people would think of it. Teenagers in general like dystopian/ darker genre’s I think, so it might be harder for them to understand why you write it. The world…[Read more]