Folith-Feolin

Hugo

Hugo Angelo began to run.

He looked like a lean ally cat, with a black suit and soft footfalls. Hair looped around his face, glistening with golden and red highlights.

The parking lot had jammed up the street, as cars played jigsaw puzzle with each other, trying to make it out into the city for shopping week. But above, leaves from the…[Read more]

@loopylin

Actually yes, his friend WILL be joining 🤣😋

@everyone

Adding a new character!

Hugo Angelo

Age: 16

Appearance: You’ll get the description in the RP, so I’ll just skip this 😝

Personality: Hugo is a super sweet older brother. He can act naive and childish at times, but mostly only with Seb, since he likes to balance out his ado…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

XD yeah it’s too bad they don’t let you pick the part of the picture you want to use

@loopylin

wow that looks really cool! Reminds me of spiderpunk from ATSV XD

@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

There’s a lot of things I could say in reply, but I think the best thing to do would be spend a long time on worldbuilding. The more worldbuilding you do, the more will become clear, and the world will seem more real to the viewers. I know pantsing if fun, and you can totally do it, but it sounds like it might be…[Read more]

@everyone

Sounds like a plan!!! 😊💕

I can’t wait to go shopping!!

The girls can go to the mall, and the guys can be dragged along and it will be totally awesome 😜😝

And I’ll have to think of a villain I can twist up into a moody teenager. *cracks knuckles*

@loopylin

Room assignments have just kinda meshed together, so you can pretty much roo…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Right, like the internal resolution vs the outward resolution. Sooo, I sort of feel like Katrin doesn’t exactly have her own huge goal. It’s more she’s trying to survive and protect her brother, but I’ve lately realized that she also holds a grudge against the administrators for a few reasons, mostly just because of the living conditi…

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Oh and as long as the rest  of your book is unique it’s alright to have a stereotypical ending. It’s when your book has a love triangle, America as a setting, and rebels taking down the government. If you can add one factor to really mix it up and make it something totally new, it won’t be considered stereotypical (Is it set in England for a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oof that’s a hard one XD

For a single novel, I think you do need a defining ending.

Something I have heard about in my research about plots is that there’s two separate goals your character has to reach. One of them is said and known about, such as defeating the government, the other is never mentioned but obvious to the reader.…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Thank you so much!!

Lol go ahead and use it for a bit if you like! I’m not terribly attached because it was just a sketchy thing XD

@freedomwriter76

Aww it was cute!!

@loopylin

I love the vibes! 🥰😍 Pretty… you should do more. Post more. Seriously.

Oh, when did that happen? Purely out of curiosity.

@loopylin @esther-c @euodia-vision @smiley

I also want to!!

Altho I also want to wait a little longer for @godlyfantasy12 – she was really excited for it and planned out the whole thing… ❤️

Maybe before the dance, we shop for outfits? There are so many shops nearby! The whole school could cancel classes today for it!

And some of the boys h…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you! 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

You’re welcome!

You should totally read them!

The villains are human mutant sorts, who have been turned into lizards. They also elongate ssss’s like your character does!

“These ssstinky humansss” would be a common phrase 🤣

They are a christian fantasy allegory by Andrew Peterson. Themes are great, characters are great, the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks!

@savannah_grace2009

Girl your descriptions of emotions are SO good!!

Also your villains remind me of slarb from the wingfeather saga XD

@savannah_grace2009

Sure thing! Post whatever writing you like!

@esther-c

Lol, Ev and his constant attitude

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @smiley @hybridlore @keilah-h @trailblazor

Ignore that tag if you’re not interested!

I’ve been working on my second version (Not really draft, it’s a total re-plot) of book 1! Here’s a unedited…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Hey girl!! Yes it has been forever!! I’m sorry I haven’t been on in…almost 3 weeks 😅 Life’s been crazy. Today is my baby sister’s one year birthday 😭❤😭❤ I love her sooo much, she’s literally the most precious little thing 😭❤ She’s growing up way too fast 🥺

it’s totally fine! In person life is generally more healthy than…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Hey how’s life? I feel like it’s been a long time sense we’ve chatted!