Folith-Feolin

Hey guys,

quick request. There’s a younger boy in our church who has come down sick while in chemotherapy, and he will be in the hospital tomorrow. His family cannot all be together during Christmas because they only let in a few visitors at a time, and even if the max limit for people was higher, they probably wouldn’t let them all in bec…[Read more]

@overcomer

My style…I’m not really sure where it has come from, except that almost all the poetry I’ve read was written before the 1940’s.

The meter here is roughly 7-8 syllables with a pause of cadence in the middle of each line. The rhythm is One and TWO and Three and FOUR. I hope that helps and isn’t more confusing.

Ah, slant rhyme. I have…[Read more]

Heyy, merry Christmas!!

Christmas wasn’t always a holiday for us, but we started when I was around twelve, and it didn’t even feel too different because we already went to the holiday service, enjoyed the lights, played in the snow, etc.

We still pretend Santa Claus is real because my youngest sibling is six, and most of the others are not muc…[Read more]

@rae

This is an AU, so either you could alter his age or just pretend since he’s from a different world, he’s allowed to go through a few classes of high school to catch up. You add him if you want, it’s cool *shrug*

Hugo

“I should have expected something like that…” Hugo chuckled softly, his chestnut loops falling across his face, hiding a di…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

That was soo good! I didn’t cry lol, but I could feel my eyes getting hot 😂

Does it seem boring?

Nope! Almost, but I was mostly engaged.

How is the pace?

It’s good for the scene, it feels a little slow but it’s not a action scene so that’s to be expected.

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

Aw yess… I a…[Read more]

@rae @savannah_grace2009

Wow, just noticed, their relationship bloomed… unexpectedly fast 😂

@rae

Nar only usually talks this much to her family XD Hugo’s already apparently considered family!

Aw, he loves it when people trust him XD

Hugo

“Your brother doesn’t go to this school?” Hugo asked.

“Not right now.”

“Maybe he’ll surprise you. My brother came first, and I followed. It might be the same for you two.”

Nar brushed a curl be…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

Hmm…true, true.

How do I sign up?

Random interjection of verse!!!!

Just a girl with big dreams and a heart full of Going,

Hands for the harvest and tales for the Sowing,

Awaiting her story but even then knowing-

That fields laid to follow are still part of Growing.

@livingwoodchronicles

This looks amazingly! I would love to join in, although…

My writing isn’t the very great yet, (but my sister who is reading over my shoulder just said it wasn’t bad either). I do write clean, the prose is just bumpy. I’d love to try though.

@rae

Hugo

“I don’t have a lot of pastime, because I’m either working or on a night job. I… sleep. Make dinner for the lot of us, turn on some weird opera, settle down on an armchair, and sleep. And it’s the same for my brother and his friends. You wouldn’t believe how many times we accidentally sit on each other, and it’s like sitting on a y…[Read more]

@esther-c

of course! 🙂

@rae

I’m not sure what to call my style, besides being metered and rhymed. I don’t know a whole lot about poetry, besides a few basic rules.

Hmm, thanks for ideas and feedback!

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you! It’s one of my best so far.

Hey y’all, I and my sister will be on off and on for the next couple of days (especially tomorrow), so that could potentially add 2 to your numbers.

@esther-c

Huh, I’ve never really thought of it that way before, but I think that’s the aspect of their relationship that I play off of in the second book to create more conflict. Man, I am going to be pondering over this all day. XD

XD glad I could make you think! It might be a good source of conflict for book 2, but I think it would be great if…[Read more]

@loopylin

Well PppppPpPfffffffffff

Goodness

I’m just trying to protEct the babies; what if you were going to traumatize them with some tragic events? Now they’ll be stuck safely in KP limbo forever.

@loopylin

XD Sorrryyyyy

@rae

Hugo

“I wish. Unfortunately my baby brother? Seb? He was the second to discover how people change. It depends on your long-term mental state, not whatever you want. And most of the time, these changes slowly intensify your worst beliefs… To use his words.”

They stood still now. Hugo hooked his thumbs in his…[Read more]

@rae

Hugo

Realn sounded like a fairy story.

“…Here I am talking so much! What of your culture?” Nar laughed, her curls thrown around her face, like a windswept flower.

She looked like a fairy too. Just a little.

“My culture?” Hugo blinked, and hesitated. “Um… let’s see.”

Nar probably thought he was looking for words. She stared up at him…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m still not getting notified when you tag me 😭

anyways they looks super cute together!

@loopylin

Wow those hands look amazing!!

@savannah_grace2009

1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.

Nope! Super intriguing!

2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?

Very relatable!

3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]