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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
The pocket thing. XD
Leo
The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.
Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.
Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
*Gasp of joy*
He’s perfectly amazing. I love the goggles. They may now end up in his character design. And the tools. Yes. XD
Kinda want to change my profile pic now…
*Suddenly realizes I’ve never done an aesthetic for Leo. Or his book*
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂
Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD
I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.
Thanks!
I am curious, though. How did Timon a…
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
Oh wow, that was a bit of a lore dump
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whaley replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
I want to contribute, but this isn’t really advice, because I’m not that experienced. (Disclaimers, disclaimers, you get the drift.)
I enjoy making an environment that challenges the character. That way, even if the villain is average, I can make up an elaborate floor-plan for the fight.In Baztet, the city is colorful and fun, but it also has a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 15 hours ago
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 10 hours ago
I’m sorry, there are just too many uses for Disney Princess quotes. I want to watch Tangled again, just to remember all of Flynn Rider’s lines. My quote arsenal is running low.
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 10 hours ago
He’s not a believer but seems to be asking the right questions recently
That’s a good sign. :-]
Is he older or younger than you?
He is a year younger than me, but you wouldn’t know it by looking at us. He is heavier (due to exercise and being a ravenous teenage boy), and he’s in a wheelchair, so it’s hard to guess who is taller.
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 11 hours ago
My brother loses his steam over many inconsequential details.
Me: 🎵 It’s funny how some distance makes everything seem smaaaaaalll 🎵
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 11 hours ago
have you ever seen Frozen?
✨ Let it gooOooOoOOoooOo  ✨ *Throws back my hair dramatically* I sing that song whenever my siblings are unnecessarily argumentative.
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 days, 11 hours ago
Do you ever have that problem?
Oh yeah, all the time. I’d say to write it down anyway, because there is always some reason why you had the idea in the first place.
Every idea has a nugget of interest behind it, and if you feel some appeal despite knowing it won’t work, write it down. Then think about why it appealed to you…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 15 hours ago
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)
I believe every C…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 days, 16 hours ago
Heya, please pray for a quick recovery for my brother in the emergency room. He has a shunt for his medical condition, and while at therapy, they heard a crack in his neck. It’s possible the cord connecting the shunt to the rest of his body has snapped.
He’s doing fine. I think he’s more concerned that he can’t flex his abs. *Rolls eyes* But it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 5 hours ago
Love how you always have illustrations on hand, by the way. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 5 hours ago
Thanks, lollll
(I just realized I try to match the other person’s tone, that person being you)
oh my word!! It’s so accurate tho!! That is a total Leo expression! And Rory is… yeah, being Rory. 😂
😁 Hehehe, I’m glad it has the right feeling, even if it’s cartoony. I felt like it was right to add Leo because he’s pla…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 5 hours ago
Could you expand more on what you mane by that, please?
I like to write down every idea I have so that I don’t have to contain everything in my head and forget it. So, the opposite of Ellette. (Why are we always the opposite? Why??)
I organize the ideas by topic (plot, worldbuilding, etc) very deliberately. I’m trying to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 9 hours ago
*Shivers* Ooh, I love outline brainstorming.
Do you have any habits that help you think more efficiently?
By this, do you mean a method of organizing your ideas? Because that’s my favorite way of making brainstorming quick and easy, while also productive.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 10 hours ago
I didn’t draw your characters very accurately. (They are both supposed to be older, Leo probably doesn’t have goggles.) But I remember reading a section of the roleplay and having a specific image in my head, so I drew it, and here it is. Rory stands, Leo is on the stool.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 10 hours ago
I’ll have to get that class moving, I suppose.
What’s with the neck thing?
Yeah lol, that’s my fault.
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whaley replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 13 hours ago
Aaand this is not what this topic is for. I apologize for rambling, Shadow. 😅
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