Folith-Feolin

@esther-c

Awesommme, I’m glad that worked. For me, I want to add description in longer paragraphs because they have a softer sense of time, and you can afford to give the information in a solid chunk. And then like you said, actions and dialogue are shorter.

Not that I always follow my own thoughts! Buuut verbalizing this might help me stay consistent.

@loopylin

Yaayyy the Loops likey

Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.

So, as it happens, I am curious too. XD I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for. I have gue…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwww, so fun! (Why do your grown characters still ignite the “poor little babies” part of my brain?)

Also…what does Nikolai look like perchance? And have you done a collage for him? (If you haven’t…well now, I don’t know a whole lot about his story, but I think I’ve caught his drift)

@ellette-giselle

Good. That’s what I assumed was happening.

The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later.

I’m afraid I was more concerned over the emotional/psychological aspect, but I suppose that’s kinda what you meant.

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*Cackles*

Oh, and I wasn’t sad. I was almost angry. Slightly mad. Highly miffed. And rather sorry for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Glares*

You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.

*Huffs*

*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*

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As to the last section…

This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I used Simublast, it was the first website I could find that didn’t take forever to load. 😌

@keilah-h

it could be your character speaking if you want, there’s no confimation so it’s up to the reader.

Yeah totally. I saw the hat line as my own character’s line, since he has a hat, but it works for more than one character.

@raxforge

Thanks for answering my questions :]

Crosshair also could’ve been the guy who said “No” to breakfast, although that could easily have been Alpha as well.

That person was addressed by the president as Markus Haziair

@keilah-h

I’m leaving the dialogue up to interpretation. XD Although I have my own idea of who was speaking

@keilah-h @esther-c @lydibug @loopylin @jonas @godlyfantasy12 @freed_and_redeemed @smiley @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @rae @lightoverdarkness6

Warning, everyone… this part is pretty chaotic because everyone is in the same room, trying to figure out what is going on, talking over each other. This is also the exposition part.

Briefing Over…[Read more]

@raxforge

Now I’m even more curious. Sorry if you don’t want to answer. 😅 You said ‘need’ a lot, does that mean you would only talk about death if you need to, not at any other time?

@loopylin

My sisters are concerned, they’ve paused our ice cream party to pray.

@loopylin

Oh yeah, stress can definitely give you stomach pains, and a hard time eating. He sounds like he needs a hug. I’m glad he feels a little better <3

@the_lost-journal

Praying <3

When you aren’t immediately sad about the whole thing, it might help to go to your parents and talk with them about it, even if they seem angry when you lash out.

For example, my parents can feel frustrated with my younger brother, but when he tries to explain why he had a temper explosion, they can see he isn’t…[Read more]

@raxforge

Oh, that’s an interesting perspective I’ve never heard before. So you wouldn’t write about death in any circumstance because it might offend people?

But I have done enough things in my life that tell others that I’m not a Christian, I don’t need to add to the list.

This comment above ^ Do you find it unlikable to talk/write about death?

@raxforge @rae

If Ben, Flare, and Baron head for the river, they shouldn’t be followed too closely. The ironwalkers are jostled enough from Marcel’s strike that they have their equivalent to severe nerve damage and/or concussions. 👍

Discussion question. What is the difference between a protagonist and a hero? What qualities do you like to see in a protagonist, and do you prefer them to be a ‘hero’ or nay?

I’mma throwing this out there because I like reading people’s responses. 🙂

@loopylin

I give you the stamp of approval. 🏅 But you already know that, since rubberhose is my favorite.