Folith-Feolin

Watch out y’all, space princess coming through

Me: *Gets super stressed out and overemotional over the relationships in my life, and other people’s problems*

Dad, sitting next to me: You’re like that alien girl from that movie… Space Heroes? Galaxy Guardians?

Me: *Sniffs* You mean Mantis?

Dad: Yeah. *Wiggles fingers over his head* With the freaky bug things.

Me: *Gets overly enthusiastic in philosophy class*

Teacher: Time to move on…

Me: B-But we’re not done!!

A particularly charismatic boy: *Leans back in his chair, casually smiling at me through half-lidded sparkly eyes* You. Me. Lunch break. Kierkegaard.

@rae

Anything works with me! It may take a lot to convince Winston to do anything out of his little bubble but I will do the best I can.

@kathleenramm

My hero… *bows and offers you the sword of the legendary Kingdom Keeper*

@rae

Oki, I read it!

Overall, I think it’s well-paced and has a great amount of description. I could understand the basic setting and tech even though it isn’t my own world or story. The ship’s name, The Nightmare, automatically makes me want to root for it XD

I especially liked Mandin’s appearance! You used body language, but almost more im…[Read more]

I’m BACK BABY!!!

*aHem*

Just glad the posts are working again!

@kathleenramm

*Takes a deep gasp after rising from the dark chasm of silence*

Thank you!! I appreciate your dedication with tech, which I do not have 🙂 Hopefully your magical powers will bring us great prosperity in the future.

…Hopefully this post comes through??

@loopylin @rae

Let’s try this again for the millionth time y’all

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Seb stood in between Eddie and Dante, and put his hands on his hips. “I said mingle, not strangle. What’s the beef?”

HELP

Wyoh’s messing with me big time… (this is a test)

@lightoverdarkness6

Sorry I messed up your tag!

@rae

I’m going to pop in and give my tidbit (because that’s so much more fun than homework).

1. Some scenes need to be short, some long, depending on what’s being delt with. This one may be short, but it’s a good length for the subject.

2. No? It just felt like a wrap up description of Mandin/a scene conclusion/transition to whatever was coming…[Read more]

@esther-c

Totally okay! I get you😂 I haven’t RPed in like… *mentally calculates, and gives up because of my awful concept of time* at least a month or something

And if you need me to RP something random to get things started again just lemme know!

@lightoverdrkness6

Thank you so much girl! really appreciate the prayer <3

Oh girl, I am so sorry, I know that must be so so hard. I want you to know that I’m praying for you girl. ❤ Something that comforts me when I’m struggling is remembering that these trials are going to end one day. This fallen world that we are in is not our eternity, and…

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@rae

Helloooo, I’m heeeeere

1. Feels like average length to me! Then again it isn’t in book format on KP, and is one continuous page, so I may be gauging it incorrectly. I think if it’s 2-3 pages long on your document, that feels adequate.

2. If it’s the end of a chapter, it works as a summary. If not, I don’t think it’s too abrupt to have in…[Read more]

@rae

Maybe they have to find a special macguffin in the middle of this fairy tale land, that will effectively send them back home? Like Oz? And creatures keep attacking them to protect the special artifact? Just spitting ideas here lol.

@loopylin @rae

There are at least five good teachers tho! There’s Mr. Gregory ofc. Then there’s the art teacher with the red and yellow scarf, Miss Soleil, and the two dance instructors with a romance subplot.

…Granted, I created all of these characters XD But nice adults are underrated in fiction and deserve screentime.
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The twins and…[Read more]