Folith-Feolin

Idk if this will help, but since rivals are basically competing to be the best at something, I like to give them some similar traits, but also some strikingly different traits. This way they end up competing in a “similarity” but the reason for competition is a “difference.”

Two superheroes who are Fire and Water personalities, and both believe…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

That snippet reminded me I have a question :] How did Riker kill Leon’s wife? Did he report her to the Nazis, or…? Was it on purpose or an accident?

@ellette-giselle

Whatever you want to do!

@theshadow

Thank you! : )

@linus-smallprint Please correct me if I’m wrong about guys

The illustrations are great! I love the sibling drawing.

I don’t know what that would be! If they were girls it would be easy! I just don’t know how guys “connect” and whenever I try to write it my brothers look like they’re going to throw up. They say I make them too girly in their getting to know each other, so I just kinda steer clear. An…

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Oh wow I missed y’all’s messages XD

@ellette-giselle

I would still love feedback on the other stuff as we went, but I’m a little at a loss with Aaron at the moment.

Thank y’all so, so much. I hope y’all can tell that this really is helpful…… I can see there’s a problem now…… I just have to fix it………

I understand what it feels like to get mixed feedback about a character, it’s so fr…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!

No prob! And no bad thoughts from you about yourself!! I only convey thoughts well through journaling/writing :] Trust me, if you knew me irl, I am quite slow with my t…[Read more]

Sorry Sara, I tagged you in the above message instead of Ellette. So if you get an extra notif, that’s why. 😅

@savannah_grace2009

oh nooooo!! Say it isn’t so!!

I’m sorry 😭😕

I love Aaron so much!! He is my secret big brother, and now he’s under attack!! Ok, I will try to take into consideration what you two have been saying. It’s going to be hard, especially since he’s perfect in my mind, so it’ll be tough to figure out how to improve him.

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Aight I’ll resurrect it with some ranting

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @godlyfantasy12 (Asked for tags but she’s gone 😥)

I’ve never gone crazy over my own characters because it’s not my personality I guess. But I just want to say, I have a semi-new character relationship which is actually my favorite right now.

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@savannah_grace2009

It is!! I will probably post some more ideas soon.

I also don’t think everyone needs my advice/ideas because each person thinks in their own way. But I don’t know who will randomly see this topic and be helped by it. So again, anyone can give tips here because it might be of use in the future.

@loopylin

I like the Twins’ cute scrunchy noses

Hey Ellette! I read through all the scenes so far, and although I’m not going to do a scene-by-scene critique, I can give you overall thoughts. Please read this with a grain of salt! 😅

I like the Crusades-ish concept, where different people are invading Ardenta partially to spread their own belief system. It makes Aaron look like a go-between and…[Read more]

Oh sorry haha I thought you meant it would be on that date. Never mind, perfect.

I’ll join. :] If it’s August 1st, it will have to be before 12:00 EST because I have a birthday party at 1.

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww tysm!! Hahaha yes, slowly getting there😴

Oh my goodness I’m so sorry girl 🥺 That sounds so scary!! I’m always here if you ever need anything. My grandparents yesterday were actually just talking about when my uncle had Lyme disease when he was a teenager and the doctors gave him an antibiotic that cured him.

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@lightoverdarkness6

Hey girl! I missed you so much! XD I was so happy to see this notification!

I’m glad you got to go enjoy those summer camps, it sounds like a lot of fun! Yeah, sounds crazy busy, hope you get to catch up on that sleep.

My summer has been really rough, lol. My chronic illness has gotten worse and I’m not sure I’ll be able to…[Read more]