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@filewriterbase13x Oh good!  And I like B-bot. 🙂

@filewriterbase13x Sorry it took me so long to read this part of your story. This was great! I’m really enjoying the story so far 🙂

“I was going to try to explain to the friendly giraffe that we had lost our minds and believed that she had too,”

@filewriterbase13x XD XD That was a really excellent installment

@filewriterbase13x, THIS IS FANTASTIC!

if you have space to add me you can, if not thats fine

@filewriterbase13x Your stories are so fantastic!!!  This is great!  The way B-bot talks makes him sound both cute and wise. 🙂  But I have to ask…what is a B-bot?  Is it something you made up?

*patiently waits turn to be in story*

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@filewriterbase13x Yay! I’ll try to get to this Monday or Tuesday 🙂

@filewriterbase13x    Oh Wow! I love this so much! Thanks for putting me in! 🙂

I think the line “I was going to try to explain to the friendly giraffe that we had lost our minds and believed that she had too,” could explain all of kingdom pen. Lol. 🙂

@filewriterbase13x It’s not that I didn’t like Madelyn. I just found Frederick especially interesting. 🙂 Sorry if I’m being too critical…the story is good.

Ah, cool. I was wondering about that a bit, but I haven’t seen many typos. Part Four made me anxious for the next one.

@filewriterbase13x Everyone?! Oh d-d-d-dear-dear! (please, someone tell me they know that reference!) That is most peculiar. Though I have to admit that if everyone has lost their mind, it does make sense what kinda happened to B-bot.

You included me!! Yippee!! Thank you! 😀

A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part Four: The Losing of Minds

“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?

I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.

@filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.

1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

@ariel-ashira Oh really? That was you? Congrats on getting published! And I really enjoyed your poem! XD. I’ve tried memorizing Broken. And I’ve only gotten like the first two lines.

Yup. I beat you too it. 😉

So…I would rather not let the whole world see my work, so could I share it with you through Google Docs via email?

Lol. Yes, @filewrite…[Read more]

@livgiordano Yes, please post more!!  It really has helped me.  I memorized it.  I think of it all the time.  And good job getting @filewriterbase13x to join.  She’s been awesome!  Did you read The Light Triumphs?  Its the first I have submitted to KP, but you might enjoy it.

@filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.

I think you were pretty detailed.  You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.

I have a good idea of the guy.  His face is not clear in my mind though.

The emotion was good.  It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though.  A few words describing it a little more would help.

I would def…[Read more]

Lol yes. @filewriterbase13x is a very good friend. And if you don’t mind me mentioning it, I was the one who recommended that she should join. 😉 This place is pretty cool. *high fives back* And yes, I can definitely say that you’re one of my best friends, girl.

@filewriterbase13x I like it!  Its really good!  I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned.  What era is it?  Modern?

Do you and livgiordano know eachother?

@filewriterbase13x I would totally go for this if I hadn’t already read it. 😉 *nods* To everyone else, go for it!! It’s soo good.