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@rochellaine. Well, sometimes my cousins call me Sylvester, so maybe you are calling me.;)

@rochellaine I think dragons might still exist some places on the earth, and I do believe that there used to be lots of them.  But dragons are viewed kind of like unicorns are.  Maybe there were unicorns as well? 🙂

@rochellaine  Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:

“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”

@rochellaine  Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀

The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉

@rochellaine By the way, what is with “Sylvester!” if you dont mind me asking?

@rochellaine Maybe if its a serious poem, use a fear of something that isnt as fantasized as dragons are.  If its a comical poem, then use whatever imaginary creatures you can find.  Even still, I love it!  Its an awesome poem.  Dont take my advice because I said so, because I still have tons to learn!

Oops.  I spelled force like forse.  Sorry about that.  Sorry its such a lousy part, but I wasnt sure what else to write.

“Where do you think your going?”  Akira asks, pushing me back onto the bed.  Tears begin to form in my eyes.  I pull myself up again with trembling hands and forse my eyes to focus.  “The Ravine.”

Akira’s blond head shakes back and forth.  “Are you out of your mind?”

“Please!”

“No.  You can’t.  Just look at yourself!  I know you want to get it,…[Read more]

@bekreations 😀 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet. Stan, my pet dragons, says Hi.

I love fantasy too :D, and yeah, three chapters isn’t so bad. I have one story I’d like to write I can’t even get the prologue done correctly.

Looking forward to getting to know you, too. 😀 *passes our raspberries, cinnamon rolls, pancakes, and ice cream*

@sam-kowal. Dear Stan, most eloquent of dragons, I give thee thanks from the depths of my heart for the warm greeting bestowed upon me!  I am indeed grateful for the hearty welcomes of the kapeefers and excited to be here among such talented writers and creautures!  You are the first dragon I have ever heard of that has a taste for raspberries,  …[Read more]

@catwing XD Wow, yeah. At least Stan doesn’t have to watch all other kinds of dragons his age whizzing around in the air like catwings do. He is kinda old to have such small wings though. I’m hoping they can improve

@rochellaine Wow, great job. It’s inspiring, and adding dragons always is great 😀

Because of the dragons, I find it almost somewhat comical in nature still; it gives it a certain lightness which helps balance the introspective side.

The comparison of facing your fears to facing dragons is very fitting, too.

@ariel-ashira

Stan: It is with utmost delight of spirit and satisfaction of mind with which I attempt to greet and welcome you to the fair land of Kingdom Pen, a place where knowledge sprouts bounteously as grass and where raspberries are the esteemed delicacy of our great monarch—

Me: Umm… Stan? Why don’t we just stick with ‘hi’ for today

@dekreel @catwing  *sits back in chair, chuckling*  You guys…

@rochellaine I like it!  Although its kind of in between serious and comical at the same time.  Thanks for sharing!

@alia It took a few pages for one of mine threads to hijacked. But I got a GIF war so it’s all good. 😀
You are welcome. Felines have been trying to tell people for years, but they just scolded us. Though sometimes they would pamper us. But we have not forgotten our mission!
Prove that one of ancestors (who’s name is long lost) discovered…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart Thank you!  I like what the names mean, so thats why I chose them as a pen name.  What do you like to draw?

Right handed. 🙂

@catwing I love your characters names!  I love coming up with names!  Romance or not, it sounds like a story I would love to read!  Is it a roman island like in the Mediterranean?

@dekreel @dragon-snapper I’ll have you know that chairs were invented for scratching, then people used them for sitting, but later on they revolted and dragons had to be called to melt them. Just some history for you. Also that Issac Newton stole the rights of discovering gravity from a cat who’s name has long been forgotten… Because his name…[Read more]