Kingdom Pen | filewriter@base13x | Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/filewriterbase13x/activity/ Activity feed for filewriter@base13x. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 356c6ab6bb898a7a6143f6fa44a3f623 filewriter@base13x posted an update: @ariel-ashira, @livgiordano, @ingridrd, @catwing, @supermonkey […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/78958/ Sun, 29 Apr 2018 21:02:43 -0400 @ariel-ashira, @livgiordano, @ingridrd, @catwing, @supermonkey42, @sam-kowal, @dekreel, @julia-r, @warrenluther04, Hi Guys. Sorry I haven’t been on a lot lately. I have been busy. I just wanted you all to know, I have a new blog!!! Okay so I only have like three posts so far, but I just started it somewhat recently. yes, Liv, I know you already…[Read more]

]]> 2 176d0c4d7b9180a7db60d1dd5efbe71f filewriter@base13x and Ben Powell are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/78627/ Tue, 24 Apr 2018 00:03:11 -0400 0 406c0002c040a6fb33402013315342d7 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71399 Sun, 22 Apr 2018 22:18:42 -0400 Ok, guys. So, the computer tells me that I posted my next part, but I can not see it. Can you guys see it? Did you get tagged?

]]> d1054da723addf994559c5b2ebbf5a21 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-71304 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 23:50:39 -0400 Oh, I am sorry @jenwriter17. I have not been on lately, because I have been super busy. I will give you access as soon as I find out how. πŸ˜‰

]]> 40e361c14a7db12b60e2434cd5080cd7 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-71302 Fri, 20 Apr 2018 23:49:15 -0400 @supermonkey42, no you weren’t too critical, I asked for honesty and I got it. Thank you so much for that!

Okay, good thanks for helping me with that. πŸ™‚

]]> d0a23268eecea744cc0a18276d2535b1 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71110 Wed, 18 Apr 2018 17:40:48 -0400 @skredder, haha. No I don’t know that reference. At least I don’t think so. It does sound familiar, though. Of course, I included you. You asked me too didn’t you? πŸ™‚

@kaya-young, thank you and you’re welcome. Yes, I suppose it does. πŸ™‚

Oh, welcome back @dekreel, oh and she’s gone again. Yes, I would live to add you. I am definitely overstocked…[Read more]

]]> eee53ef6457e0f3302c3c0a7b838a51c filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70894 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 00:00:25 -0400 Agh! I mean @skredder.

]]> 800aa64f6df2744feebb712e64ff8508 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70892 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 23:56:23 -0400 Oops, @catwing and @skreeder

]]> 976f4f03baacb2f3e79157f312f17e84 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70891 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 23:55:13 -0400 A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part Four: The Losing of Minds

“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?

I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]

]]> ab5c9980154165c9e820673382a0581c filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70875 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 18:56:57 -0400 @livgiordano, Okay Great! I can’t wait to have you in my KPA. I might in this next part. If not then the next (part 5). Is it ok if you are from a certain fantasy kingdom that a certain you came up with for a certain story? I just think that that would be awesome if you were a TD. do you know what I am talking about?

]]> 04790362a06b339a0c957ee0a30e44c9 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70870 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 18:08:13 -0400 Yay! @supermonkey42 Thank you for critiquing this for me. It will be super helpful when I write my third draft. Too detailed? I was thinking it was not detailed enough. But I think I know what you mean. The thing is that we jump into the action at like chapter 3. So, I guess I could try to even it out between 2 and three a little more. I think…[Read more]

]]> 8e94f7693d3713ef4f06c8e2f69ee186 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70858 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 14:06:18 -0400 @livgiordano, of course. Aw, thanks. Um, one question. Can you have like actually Rapunzel length hair? Or do you want it to be your true length? Do you want me to write you as yourself, write you as your self with additional quirks, or add something in particular to your character.

@skredder, Haha, don’t worry. I am sure my mind is somewhere. I…[Read more]

]]> ab1504c2c0d28c82778f25fa9d8ecd47 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70823 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:54:09 -0400 @ariel-ashira. I loved her poem too! Thanks for answering those questions. I have noticed that I need a lot more description in my writing. Agh I really need to work on that. It is good to have a second opinion. Thank you!

Yes, @livgiordano does really good poetry. She did an awesome poem for a story we are coauthoring. It was more like a story,…[Read more]

]]> 46a25e0e5b3f52efec6772568a896de5 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70803 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:58:53 -0400 Oh, @ariel-ashira, sorry I didn’t answer your question. It is in the future. I imagine it in the late 2000s or maybe even later, but I don’t really have a set date.

 

]]> 627eb1d3668e1f58e5d7dcab3b72d64b filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70802 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:56:13 -0400 @ariel-ashira, thanks! I don’t want to be a pest, but can you answer any of my questions?

Hmm, what do you think @livgiordano ? Do we know each other? Just kidding, yes we do. Quite well actually. At least I think so. Liv is one of my best friends in the world. She’s pretty awesome. *high fives*

]]> 988c262cb0b4e17c8af24ee946e9122e filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70799 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:38:59 -0400 @livgiordano. Aw, that’s nice of you to say. Yeah, I would have tagged you too, but you have already read this part and know like the whole plot already. 😁

]]> aa748d5daf74813e480d2dae7577ac2b filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70796 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:14:26 -0400 Oh, and I guess I put the mock cover on there too. I didn’t mean to do that. Oh well, you guys will probably like that anyways.

]]> f249a8964a37072ac71e767931690991 filewriter@base13x started the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/ Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:11:35 -0400 Ok, guys. I really wanted to try this, and I think (hope) I will learn a lot of stuff from this. I hope you guys will help me by honestly critiquing this. What is here is my prologue and almost all of chapter 1. My writing is basically the same all the way through style wise, at least.

What I mostly want to know is:

1) Do I give enough…[Read more]

]]> 6c615321cf199e19a3896da0d39325f3 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70732 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:48:04 -0400 Bye, @jess-penrose Unfortunately, I also have to go. πŸ™ Bye. This was fun and the first time I have ever done it. I bid you both a good night. *waves and bows*

]]> b7941f6dd78116f2c68416aa19578a07 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70731 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:44:29 -0400 @jess-penrose, @skredder. Oh, okay. I get it know. Cool! I just finished Part three. As you probably already know, Skredder. Penrose, If you want to read what I just wrote, it’s on the topic, Truly lost our minds. πŸ™‚

]]> 8b7b435f5e8523dd1d9db442b79a5cb3 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70729 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:38:01 -0400 A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part three: After the Storm

I opened my eyes eyes slowly, groaning as I sat up. Confused, I realized that I was on the floor. I rubbed the soreness off of my cheek. I noticed golden sun rays shining through the little gaps of the window shutters.…[Read more]

]]> 80d42fc8bd5976451650304ce87f917a filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70723 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:18:56 -0400 @skredder. Oh, I hope you finish it in time. I am kind of embarrassed about this but… what is steampunk exactly?

]]> 4f6115d357c18dbfc1e7543ca9509895 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70719 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:07:58 -0400 Thanks you two!!! How are you doing @skredder? Are you writing something now?

]]> 5fdb6acc7fb4abba3b61f4a5497988d6 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70716 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:55:46 -0400 @jess-penrose, Yay! Good Job! I am almost done with part three!

]]> f1a9485e6069877062d37b80bd7088df filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70714 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:26:18 -0400 @jess-penrose, Lucky! Go turn off those horses! LOL

]]> 7af718a9a1bb8cb5f8de0743f2eef497 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70711 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:12:20 -0400 @skreeder, thanks

]]> 0e4124f1102bfd59ad3db373cf1ff900 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/38/#post-70709 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:09:28 -0400 @skreeder, True, true. I really enjoyed the last chapter I wrote, but since it was from a different POV I am having a little trouble getting back to my original MC.

@ariel-ashira, Bye! Thanks for talking.

]]> 9d486252b04738197206e3ef3426798f filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70708 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:05:19 -0400 @ariel-ashira and @skredder. Okay. Thanks for understanding.

]]> 0e7a35e87252d464455defb33d35ba0f filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70703 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 00:00:34 -0400 @skredder, I am working on Truly Lost our Minds part three. I hope to post it sometime tomorrow. Hopefully. I really should be working onΒ Classified,Β but I am not much motivated with that at the moment, sadly.

]]> 682651b2d8d7f1c78dc028c7ce01561a filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70700 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:56:30 -0400 @ariel-ashira, and @skredder. I wish I could tell you where I am, but I’m not allowed to give out that info. No offense to you of course, just family rules.

@jess-penrose. *smug expression crosses face* That’s good. Good to know. You would probably think I was pretty boring anyways. Haha. Well, maybe.

]]> fbde5ff99b00497415216eeee886e36c filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/37/#post-70694 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:44:10 -0400 @skreeder, thought so.

]]> 5b735f09ec82831d50f248b9c23a32b2 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/36/#post-70692 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:41:29 -0400 Sup, @skredder. Your USA, right?

]]> 7c6224c973d52339a23924f91a2cbf97 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/36/#post-70691 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:40:00 -0400 @jess-penrose, Nope, sorry to disappoint you. I am not. *looks at you suspiciously, wondering if this J. A. Penrose will find the location of File Writer*

]]> 9c8e2228786ff86410791090f385e675 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/36/#post-70688 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:33:30 -0400 @jess-penrose, maybe. I really have no clue. How embarrassing. I will have to check for sure, but you are probably right.

]]> 7d4702598bdc7655d5067ca4050cc7b7 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/36/#post-70686 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:28:39 -0400 @jess-penrose, 6:30. I guess maybe we aren’t EST. *wonders* I don’t even know for sure.

]]> e9aa2466e652f216f5c11a4c8d4b3407 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/36/#post-70683 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:24:06 -0400 @jess-penrose, Nice to meet you too. I like the sound of your WIP. My main WIP is on an unofficial hold right now.

]]> 1bf1fe8b8ed18070fd44d7379d913aea filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/36/#post-70682 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:22:16 -0400 @ariel-ashira, USA. EST time. I think. Yeah.

@jess-penrose, I was wondering the same thing

]]> c9ba2411085b72c89a1867bad171699a filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/35/#post-70677 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:12:54 -0400 @jess-penrose. Great, me too. What are you working on? If you don’t mind me asking. I am doing my KP story, Truly Lost Our Minds Part: Three.

]]> e83df027a972869dfcf8703fe830f7a1 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/35/#post-70675 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 23:00:40 -0400 Ok, great! @that_writer_girl_99, Oh, I really like your user name by the way. What made you decide to be a super hero? What is your WIP? Is that a lot of questions?

]]> f79e50dd41595e9f1b28c5f72f8a733a filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/35/#post-70673 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 22:50:20 -0400 @that_writer_girl_99, Writing. *double blinks* 0:50 to 0:15? Or 0:oo to 0:15?

]]> a6ae8abadd7e6df4a45abd6d6e6d31c5 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/35/#post-70671 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 22:30:33 -0400 @that_writer_girl_99 or @jane-maree I only ask because I know you two are on.

]]> de61b58d72e445be26710d8633546a58 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/35/#post-70670 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 22:27:36 -0400 Anybody want to do this with me? I just recently figured out how to do it. *grins shyly* Who should I tag?

]]> 6a23b74d9d483289cddcd9d7de533522 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-dog-in-the-kingdom-of-pen-2/page/2/#post-70585 Wed, 11 Apr 2018 12:44:56 -0400 @catwing, Wow I love it!!! B-bot looks so cute, *cough* *notices b-bot staring at her* I mean, awesome. *b-bot looks almost smug* And my hair!!! Awesome work. It was well worth the wait!

]]> 7ba7cb3b75d53c93597a032ce8b21f1e filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/3/#post-70539 Wed, 11 Apr 2018 01:43:41 -0400 @that_writer_girl_99. Yay, I’m glad! Your character didn’t have much on the CSC, so I hope I portrayed you somewhat accurately. Well, I kind of share Ezi with you, so you can half have a Griffin.

@skredder. Thanks! You don’t need to worry. At least I don’t think so. 😉

@sam-kowal. Thank you. Yes, I really like Ezi too.☺

@notawriter. Thanks. Yes,…[Read more]

]]> 62bc2596ea36d7a4d1fd192032067905 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/3/#post-70500 Tue, 10 Apr 2018 17:24:32 -0400 @that_writer_girl_99 and @daeus Β Β  Sorry I guess I didn’t tag you.

]]> da48f0507dec4fe2566eab2c542fac8b filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/3/#post-70499 Tue, 10 Apr 2018 17:22:34 -0400 A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part two: Of Kings and of Turtles

 

When I saw what had knocked me down I laughed. The beast knocked me down again, playfully. It was Ezi. My pet Griffin.

“Okay, okay. I missed you too. Now. Get. Off. Me.” I laughed. He was too heavy to still be…[Read more]

]]> 1269f7903c0710dec67c78ee8050eaa6 filewriter@base13x and Catwing are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/77598/ Tue, 10 Apr 2018 00:49:14 -0400 0 87735c06ada3d9d6b8e0e412e722b12d filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/2/#post-70435 Mon, 09 Apr 2018 17:35:27 -0400 @that_writer_girl_99, I am glad you liked it. Is there anything that you want to add about your character that isn’t on the CSC? I am guessing not, but I’m just checking.

@sam-kowal and @ariel-ashira. Thank you guys! I better warn you both right now, that I am in love with writing cliffhangers. Just sayin’.

@notawriter and @alia. Thank you guys.…[Read more]

]]> 29e625198d5e5fd927412a5157460f40 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/2/#post-70340 Sun, 08 Apr 2018 18:02:03 -0400 A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base 13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part 1: A Place for Inspiration

The thunder crashed through the sky, followed by a flash of light. Rain. I usually loved the rain, but not today. I had a grudge against rain today. Just as I had yesterday and the day before and the day before…[Read more]

]]> 0f411320374ccad657174a2e35e57338 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/#post-70233 Fri, 06 Apr 2018 21:36:50 -0400 Ok, @ariel-ashira. And off to the CSC I go! πŸ™‚

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