Felicity

@kathleenramm

Wow! Thank you so much! That helps at lot! I did not even know any of those facts and they will help a lot in my book! Thanks again!

@loopylin

Thanks! The beginning seeds of it started during 2020. Again though, the cool thing about it is that it allows so much change in worlds. If I have a different world or story I want to tell, the magic system works in such a way where it can be put in seamlessly. So me and my sister also have too many story’s but we essentially just make…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah! That actually sounds like a cool story I’d read. It sounds like an Alien learns about human trauma, or experiences it or something, right? That would be really cool! It could get into complex themes of what it means to be human and stuff.

I totally change my worlds constantly! My current one me and my sister are working on has…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah, I’m glad your working on that. Study would be the best option yeah. Just remember there’s always another way to explain something!

@mineralizedwritings

I get that! Sometimes it’s hard to feel how much to share, imo if somebody asks for help, you can go all out on whatever they asked for help with. I’m a little cautious, so unless it’s somebody I know, I don’t give much advice unless asked of it.

Yeah, that’s probably where I go wrong sometimes. I’ll occasionally rant at peop…[Read more]

@loopylin @thearcaneaxiom  @e-m-trempke

Yes, I have Prime Video. Thank y’all! I’ll try to find it sometime.

@esther-c

Oooh. That sounds so interesting!! I enjoyed reading it and am now even more intrigued in your story!! Dylan sounds really cool! 😀

Thank you girl!! Oh good! Yeah, Dylan is pretty cool lol. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! Yeah, that clears things up a lot. Sorry if I made too many assumptions, thanks for elaborating! Does 5 not seem a little old though? That’s the age most children begin school. You say that he still remembers, but comprehension of mom, dad, and sibling names would long since been well ingrained into his mind at that point. I…

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Ahh I am so sorry!! I meant to RP before now 😅.

Vance

Bren stopped struggling as I held the knife close to his neck.

“R-Ronnie…?”

“It’s alright Bren,” His brother said, though his face expression said otherwise. “It’s…it’s gonna be alright.”

He turned his attention to me, glaring. “Let. My. Brother. Go!”

“Not…[Read more]

I’m thinking maybe Benji can meet Edward or Raymond?

this is the first time we’ve ever had a good character meet a villain all by their lonesome…

much less a tiny good character 😂

@WHALEKEEPER

MEEEE

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s good to know, thanks! Even then though, I sometimes feel like I might come off a little pretentious when I’m either sharing or critiquing.

I get that! Sometimes it’s hard to feel how much to share, imo if somebody asks for help, you can go all out on whatever they asked for help with. I’m a little cautious, so unless it’…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Cool! Yeah, that clears things up a lot. Sorry if I made too many assumptions, thanks for elaborating! Does 5 not seem a little old though? That’s the age most children begin school. You say that he still remembers, but comprehension of mom, dad, and sibling names would long since been well ingrained into his mind at that…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

XDXD glad the suspense is getting you lol! That might have actually been the last one lol 😂

@keilah-h

Elliot

“That one’s … Elissa, I believe,” the man told him, pointing to the woman with the bland style. “And call me Crosshair. If you ever forget it, just take a look at this.” He pointed at a cross tattooed over his eye. Well, Elliot thought, Maybe he has the same dramatic flair that I do. Crosshair spoke again, “Where did you c…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

it’s fine! I think people were just confused because we do have a forum just for critiques, where most of that happens. People are pretty open to any advice here though, we all want to get better and others incite is always useful!

@lightoverdarkness6 Heyo!!! U wanna make an RP for Vance?

@freedomwriter76

Aww Riker!!! I love him so much <3<3

And Franz!!!! You better be nice!!!

@freedomwriter76 imma go ahead and RP as Benji and then if u want you can have someone run into him.

Benji

Benji’s small paws padded against the cold stone floor, making his fur shudder. He gave a small whimper, nose twitching.

A hinge squawked, making him jump, ears plastering to the sides of his head. He yelped, tail tucking between t…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Aww no, don’t feel bad!! I loved all the questions!!! I mean, KP is a place where we can help each other and encourage each other in their writing! 😀 The questions helped a lot with Dylan’s character arc! I’ve already figured it out a lot more :).

Yeah, he doesn’t know that what they’re doing is wrong (Or maybe his…[Read more]