Felicity

@princesachronicle22 Go right ahead!

Kunen is another pelgarkine, right? Allen’s’ not gonna be too keen on another one, lol. Or maybe they might get along, idk……

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so on chapter 2:

Interesting, I don’t think I have any major critiques or anything on this one. As for Nia, I wouldn’t call her a villain, though she is a minor conflict. I don’t think she’s overboard at all, she’s just not a very likeable character currently, so if that’s what you were aiming for, I think you did great!…[Read more]

@euodia.vision Those are cool! That one’s eyes don’t look too creepy. Just remember that human characters’ eyes are about the same space apart as they are wide.

@whalekeeper

Oh I love that!! Such a cute story! I want to know the next part!! 😀

And that last section…

What is an Elder? They are older than Ancient Ones, but not as ancient as the Old One.

XDXDXD That’s awesome. And I bet it made perfect sense to you back then, and now you’re just like “Oh my gosh. What in the world was I thinking?!”

XDXD

@princesachronicle22

Okay! It’s good with me! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

Okay! Sounds good 😊

@lightoverdarkness6 probably take a break for a bit since I’m a bit busy now too and haven’t been on much 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Hey girl! So since Freedom won’t be on for a while, do you want to go ahead and RP? We could probably put in a few more characters if we need to, and then take them back out when Freedom gets back? Idk, just thinking out loud here. Or we could just take a break from this RP for a bit until she gets back?

What do u think?

@theloonyone I think it’s your turn to RP? @freedomwriter76 isn’t going to be on much.

@whalekeeper LOL, I have a couple charries like that, but not here.

Jaye

Howzer’s growl alerted me. “Um, Jaye? Little help over here.”

“Sorry,” I said to the other characters. “My dragon’s calling me.”

“What is it?” I asked.

“There was a human trying to touch me.” he hissed. “They’re gone now.”

“Hmm.” I said. “Well, you need to stop being so…[Read more]

@esther-c You’re welcome!!

@kyronthearcanin

Girl, this is so good!! I love it!! 😄

I would suggest separating the two POVs into separate chapters (so you’d have 4 chapters at this point), but you do whatever you want, because chapter length isn’t the most important thing when drafting. 😉

Looking forward to the next chapters!! 😀

@whalekeeper Sure!

@loopylin Cute new profile pic! I’ll RP as soon as someone else gets a turn.

@janellebelovedpig

I’m getting more intrigued as I read. I love where this is going! 😄

@janellebelovedpig

The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! I definitely was kind of experimenting with a lot of different things that I normally don’t do in my writing… Like prophecy, and more POVs than I’m used to. Throughout the next few chapters, more are added in, including the male POV. I think something I’ve also done is made a lot of the characters similar in persona…

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@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

And here’s part 3:

All day long Little One tried to catch Loving Prudence alone, but the siblings always seemed to be around. Then just before supper Little One saw her chance.

As Little One stepped into the kitchen, Loving Prudence looked up from her…[Read more]

esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-in

Part 2 is out now! Thanks for reading! 🤗