Felicity

@whalekeeper

Dude your writing is just so unique, like the whole image of Marcel and Seb is so clear in my mind 😂 I can’t get enough of your descriptions lol

@godlyfantasy12

Uh Idk about Finn, (doesn’t freedom have a finn?) I have a Flax somewhere in there but he got kinda lost with the chaos 😅

@hybridlore

I really like what you have so far! If I were to include anything else, I would be sure to show what her emotional reaction is to the information in the beginning, so it’s obvious what kind of growth she has gone through. I feel like most people would have one or more of the five stages of grief (denial, anger, bargaining, depression…[Read more]

If anyone enjoys writing competitions, I just won one ran by the Author Nicole Born with the prompt ‘Yesterday’, and there will be more in the future.

Here’s the link to her newsletter ( h ttps://dashboard.mailerlite.com/forms/477200/91068962383594694/share ) (delete the space after the h)

My story will be featured there Sunday morning if your…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Ill check it out! Its letting you post here on KP now! I saw it was not yesterday, but its all good now 🙂

Yay!

happybelovedpig.mystrikingly.com/blog/leap-of-faithcamp

Hmm, will it let me post today?

I have a new post on my blog!

@whalekeeper GAH MY HEART!!!!

so @everyone, I think I’m probably ready to move on to the next school day.

I’ll probably have it start, for Paxton, with him receiving a notification… the rest of y’all can do whatever but yea.

Who all is in our dorm again?

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c did @mineralizedwritings or someone else have a Charr…[Read more]

@power

Ummmm. 😐 🤨 🤔 😏 🤣 👏

So you want to rant an rage about writing romance and laugh at us?🤣 Why? Nothing is wrong with a bit of romance in a book. It is nice to have a whole bunch of different pieces to your book to make it seem more real in my opinion. Of course you don’t have to have just romance. You could just have good friends…. So yeah…[Read more]

@booksbyjayna

Thanks you! I just checked out the link, its pretty helpful! I am going to go for around 60,000 as that seems right for a YA dystopian. Thanks again!💗

@esther-c

Thank you! :)💗

@hybridlore

Pretty good. I just got a really complicated and challenging ELA and I love it! The only thing I’m not doing so well on is math…😂 How is your school going? Are you homeschooled like me?

ROFL!!! I think at this point…my bully boys are just through…

I don’t even know what to RP as them now XD.

they will reconvene with their team later to make a better plan…for future situations, to take out people one by one. It’ll probably work for a while at least (consider the dark night of our story XD) but who knows with this crazy cro…[Read more]

@acancello

I totally agree with what Jayna and Hybridlore told ya. I don’t think I have anything to add. 😁

And congratulations on making it 15,000 words through your book!! 😊

@hybridlore

Great job on outlining and good luck with the anthology!

Maybe when you finish your outline you could post it? (Even if it’s messy) I don’t want to make aa suggestion that is too far from your current plot and accidentaly derail something good you had going lol

@whalekeeper BAHAHAHAHA XD XD XD Seb has officially killed me. I’m ded. ROFL.

Aramis

“What the-?!” Aramis’ eyes widened. His face changed shape multiple times as he tried to grasp what he was staring at.

How…

What…?

“How did you get in here?!” He looked at the door…still shut and locked…hadn’t cracked open even an inch.

“I have my way…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

🤣 That’s just funny/not funny.  Lol!

@hybridlore

So true!🤣

@hybridlore

Thanks!😊 💗And thanks for your answer, I think will shoot for around 60,000!

@calyhuge

Let’s just retcon part of my previous Hunter RP and say he volunteered to help Kate find Pax, ok?

Oh, and yeah, Crosshair will keep the rock. He’ll LOVE pranking Tech and their other roommate with his new phasing powers.

@everyone else

I don’t have much time for an RP today, so I’ll get around to it tomorrow if I can.

@esther-c @booksbyjayna @freedomwriter76 @janellebelovedpig @whalekeeper @everyone!

I think I may have asked this question before, but how long should my book be? I looked it up and one website said it must be over 70,000 and the rest mainly said has to be 40,000??? I am only at around 15,000 so far but don’t want to make it to long or to short😀…

@whalekeeper YEAA MARCEL!!’ GET HIM!!! Gah the poor baby 😭 Whaley I’m sorry…Edrich and Aramis are really…not good guys….

I know I’ve shown them as bullies obviously but this really didn’t show their evil side (especially Edrich’s…)

@everyone XD I don’t feel like tagging everybody…also…Pax might get hurt and…I feel bad tagging ppl because I kno…[Read more]