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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
The “tail end”??How many stories will there be in each era??
🤷♂️ Honestly I don’t know. Each era is worth centuries of time, at least in my septer, my sister’s eras are a bit shorter. That being said, I haven’t developed very much in my first era other than what’s taking place in Lucid, because it is the most earthlike, and I want to explo…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks! That seems to be the overall consensus. “confusing but the good kind.”
Oh yeah, this is actually part of the tail end of the first era of my septer. So civilization is sufficiently advanced in many ways, but it has degraded to dystopia and war. The ones referred to as the phantoms or simply “They” were…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Preptober in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I have not heard of Nanowrimo, so I cant give you any advice 🙂 But thanks for inviting me!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks! Yeah, I’ve played with the concept for a long time. As far as characters go, I feel like I’m getting better. I’m not too much of a people person, but I find psychology really interesting, and I’m intrigued by different ways one could suffer, so I think that’s my strength for characters.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Paradise Lie recreated in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hello and welcome back! You’ll see there are quite a few new rp’s happening rn, maybe you’ll find one to join!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings She also said “you and a character” so….idk we can ask her I guess
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Ah, lol, mission accomplished I guess?
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Allison replied to the topic Paradise Lie recreated in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sara!! HI!! I missed you!🤗! How are you doing?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I love this so far. It definitely is confusing, but the good kind that makes you hungry for more.
That’s good! Definitely my goal with it.
Oh man. That place where Tailen is… I’m panicking just thinking about it right now 😅
Which one? The Void or the Wraith?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
No problem! Can’t wait to hear your thoughts on it!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks!
I think in the beginning, the style of the writing was kind of confusing. Overall it does give the idea of like, very choppy thoughts, sort of less established, so if that’s what you were going for, then great job. I just think that it might throw readers off a little. I also noticed that the scene with Tailen alone in the r…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
She looks really cool!
@keilah-h @esther
I believe when Savannah made this rp she said one character each?
@savannah_grace2009 what’s the verdict?
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TheArcaneAxiom started the topic The Lucid Wraith in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @kyronthearcanin @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @orangearmadillo @lightoverdarkness @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @anyone-else-interested
So I’m finally sharing my own writing, at least some of it, I doubt I will share much beyond a few chapters, but we’ll see. A lot of you know me to be a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 OOOH
Now I just have to think of a character to invite.
Am I allowed to come too? In which case I’ve got one already.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@whalekeeper wow, what’s up with Seb?
I can have one of my charries go say hi if you’d like. They’re not doing much right now.
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen, Sarah!!
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!
I wouldn’t say I’m a Tolkien geek, but I really enjoy what I’ve read by him. I’ve watched all the movies (which I know can be quite different from the books 😉 ) but I recently finished…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings you’re welcome!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Inktober in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin awesome!!
I don’t have any kind of social media lol but I’ll definitely do at least one drawing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oh and i just saw Leon’s too! Wow, his is sad also.
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Welcome to KP, Brianne!!
I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, teen girl!
I’m thirteen as well! (Well, almost fourteen.) And I’m homeschooled too! I think that there are a lot of homeschoolers on here. 😉
So cool that you’ve visited Denmark!! I would love to visit Europe…[Read more]
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