Felicity

@savannah_grace2009 I liked it! I can’t wait for more.

-The violence and stuff I can handle. About the only thing that would raise a red flag for me is what Rath did to Sef’s mom (I don’t remember her name), but you didn’t write that very descriptively and any discomfort I had with the scene was a me problem, not a problem with your writing.

-I…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium awww he’s cute!!

@theducktator

“Slothy doesn’t like going to the doctor because last time she had her back pulled out and stuffed full of donuts.”

Did that doctor look like this?

(just a sketch, not an actual portrait)

Cause I TOLD him I was gonna be nice and not let him get caught and convicted for malpractice, if only he behaved.

Stuffing someone’s spine…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You’re good. Have fun with your family and be safe on the road! I love family trips so much. Hope y’all have an amazing time. =)

Ooh this looks like fun! Ellette has my email, but uhh I’m not free very often because of my health and I already have plans for the part of Saturday Ill be feeling ok for. What time generally have you guys been doing these at, and are you going to have another one?

@rae

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and pretty easy to understand

yay!

Yes, they were great! They aren’t the normal way people usually title chapters, and I really like that, it fits with the story well.

I was partially inspired by….I wanna say they were Percy Jackson chapter titles, but I don’t remember too well. I d…[Read more]

@theducktator lol that’s their usual dynamic

Btw did you see I added chapter titles?

@savannah_grace2009 All righty! I’ll have to write some part of it for you to read.

and yeah I read fast lol

I’ll have to critique it fully tomorrow cause I don’t have time to type out a whole thing but I will get you that feedback!

@rae oh yeah and Alpha and Silvanis arguing sounds crazy.

why can I see a pair of angry Night Furies roaring at each other as the image of how that debate would go?

@rae thank you!! Glad you liked it, and yes I can agree the ending was amazing; when I read the original I was like “oh I gotta have this, it’s great”

I actually added the comic artist’s appearance; in the original, it simply shows them all talking and then the doorbell rings, then it switches to a panel of a door, then Scout opening the door an…[Read more]

@whalekeeper you’re welcome!!!

I read all of what you had so far!

Sef and Lilitu’s frog wedding was so funny lol

@savannah_grace2009 I’m liking it so far!!
I would say things are going a little fast, but that’s not you, it’s how fast I can read.
I love your character and place names, they’re really cool. And each new main character you introduce is really interesting!

I have a story idea which is kinda similar to yours in terms of genre and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

@ellette-giselle

Wolfy dies, doesn’t he…??? 🫣 Or does he not?? I must knowwwww 😩

@koshka

Ah, okay, I get what you’re saying. I’m definitely going to be considering that getting into some major plot points coming up in my book. 😉 Thanks!

@theducktator (excuse my tardy reply🫣🤭)

Aww, that’s a bummer. 🙁 Yeah, the time off can be nice though. 😉 Still praying for y’all!! <33