Felicity

@theshadow nah mate, you’re fine

(yep I’m leaning fully into it now)

thanks!

@the_lost-journal yep! And then share your stories with people and ask them what they thought and if there’s anything they think can change. You don’t have to follow their suggestions if you think it’ll conflict with the story, but if several people are all giving you the same or similar feedback, it’s a good idea to at least check out why.

I read today’s. Gonna have to go back for Saturday’s.

sometimes I miss a chapter if I see it, mark it as important, but then it gets buried in my other emails.

@ellette-giselle oooooh

things are REALLY heating up now!

@rae that’s cute! I think it’s a funny idea.

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Praying!! <33

listen everyone I’m so sorry for diverting this topic from “contemporary writing” to “Shadow has decided Keilah sounds like Sniper now and there’s nothing any of them can do about it.” It’s 10:20 at night right now, I’m sitting in the car on my way home from a day trip, and I have only a fraction of an idea what I’m doing with my life.

@theshadow

I got my eye on ya, mate.

look what you’ve done you’ve encouraged my obsession lollllllll

@rae

B would be fun!

@rae I’d love to do that! No idea if I’d be able to do all of them but yeah!

@rae

totally would be interested, ty for the tag! Let me know if you make it happen!

@koshka lolll

my brother and I share memes with each other all the time too

@ellette-giselle

True, but you couldn’t really make him 60, and you do have a lot of teens.

@theducktator

I know, right? XD

@keilah-h

My sister sent it to me. I’m not sure where she found it.

@koshka lol where’d you see it?

You could also do something from the perspective of lyen and gorb soldiers during the wars, maybe two members of the Faithful who don’t want to kill each other since they follow the same Savior. (idk if there are gorb Faithful but I would be surprised if there weren’t at least one or two)

Or have one of the other species hear of the lyens’…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal lol

@linus-smallrpint Is there a reason for that?

Cause I remember Oliver saying the gorb species was “savage” compared to the lyens, who from your reading seem to be pretty civilized. But I’m also not inclined to trust the lyens’ rating of an enemy’s civility, so.

But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Why not bump Hans to twenty-one? So small a change shouldn’t mess up your plotting ect. but it looks like a new number. You do have a lot of ‘teens.