Felicity

@whalekeeper 😅😁

@freedomwriter76 well he already has discovered his abilities before this book. But they do come into play a LOT in this one because….

well….

they travel to the land of his Race.

@esther-c

Would it work in a similar fashion to models of higher dimensional objects, such as 3d shadows?

@acancello

I like that! There’s one thing I would change though.

I staggered over to an almond tree that was bent into the shape of a seat that was covered in moss and fallen flower petals. Then sunk down on it breathing hard.

This sentence seems a little clunky since you used two adjective clauses. (Or phrases. I forget which one.) And the n…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Then I’m with Freedom on this one. I had no idea. XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Would by definition, the unknowable, ineffable, and incomprehensible mean that we could not accomplish such a feat, or could we at least make models and representations of such things through the words we use for them, such as ineffable, though by definition, the ineffable cannot be described by words?

(Oof) (Erm…)

(Making m…[Read more]

@esther-c nerp fraid not!

@freedomwriter76 XD

so it’s book 6. It’s called Project flame right now and yes the MC was November so u got that part right

@freedomwriter76

Kinda figured it was Ev!!!! 😏

Yeah. He’s pretty easy to identify. (And hard to miss irl. 🤣 [at least in his world])

My guess for the songs you posted is: Freedom’s Fire.

@godlyfantasy12

Is it a book where Jocelyn goes through a lot??

@alia

Hi! We haven’t met, but I’m glad your back! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I love math, and searching for divine fundamental truth. I also like to explore those topics through sci-fi/fantasy writing.

What genres do you like to read and/or write?

Do you like to worldbuild?

What’s your book about?

And last but not least:

Should I be allowed to make…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Love the scene Freedom! Poor Ruben, I hope that he can realize that he can still find happiness, and that his wife and children will still love him, and that he can still be there for him!

Hello KP!! I’m finally back! Hope everyone is doing well. I don’t know who to tag here besides @gwyndalf-the-wise .

This is part five!!!

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Next morning, Rowena and Eugene took a nice walk on one of the elvish paths. They talked…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

So you want this to be a character that the readers care about, and also will stick to them for a while, right? There are many ways one could make a memorable and meaningful character. Personally, I would give him relatable trials. Give him a past that hurts (Obviously be careful with that though, because if you try pointing…[Read more]

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings

I tweaked the first scene in my book and added a bit more! Do you like it? Anything I could add or take away? Any errors you see? If your board of reading basically the same thing you dont have to write back 😀   Thank you!

I ran down a row of almond trees. Their pink and white blossoms were open and each flower c…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

If you could make any activity an Olympic sport, what would you have a good chance of winning a medal for? Nothing. I’m terrible at sports.

Yeah, I’m not good at sports either 🤣

And I love casting crowns too! I actually got to see them in concert last year, it was awesome!

Also, anybody who has advice or motivational quotes, please share! 🙂

@freedomwriter76 afraid not lol. Yea I haven’t discussed this one much

@freedomwriter76

AHHH THANKS!!!

@freedomwriter76

I KNOWWW!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭 And yessss, I thought it would be fitting for that to be his first thought, which is sweet…but…also…😭💔

That’s SOO SWEET and HEARTBREAKING 😭😭😭💔💔

AWWW, GIRL, THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! 😭💗🥰❤️ That means soooo much, knowing how much you love them!!!! 💗

YOU’RE SOOOO WELCOME!!! 🥰❤️🥰❤️ Yesss, your babies are SOO S…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @anyoneidk

@godlyfantasy12

Your favorite apparently XD

Ignore the name, it’s Layson not Tauren.

My response was unfinished XDXD

I was trying to say, I loved the scene, and I felt like I was there! (But poor Rueben!!! The baby!!!💔😭💔😭)

@freedomwriter76 WELL…okay…. 😏

MC (so actually no MCs are introduced on this book but there is an MC who goes thru a lot…)

Blinding Lights by The Weeknd

Bad Liar by Imagine Dragons

Waving Through A Window by Ben Platt

Not Today by TwentyOnePilots

Manhunt by Derivakat & Cartian

Overall WIP

Friction by Imagine Dragons

Two Birds by Regin…[Read more]