Felicity

@kyronthearcanin That one’s actually nice! My prophecies usually don’t rhyme, for example here’s my favorite one I’ve written:

Where the moons cast light on the tempest, there the wings of ice will rise, a talon completed.

Teal, a sixth sense to lead his brothers well.

Silver, seeing farther than any other.

Slate, smarts over senses.

Sky,…

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@kyronthearcanin Oh, ok cool! So maybe it starts with her eyes becoming like cat eyes or something, then she gets fire breathing, later she starts getting scales and a tail/wings? That’ll be kinda cool, tbh.

And I’ve written a couple prophecies before if you need any help!

@kyronthearcanin Whoa, really?? How did that happen, like can some dragons turn into humans? Because I remember reading about a myth where a shark chieftain could shift himself into a human, and when he married a human, their kid had shark features. So is it something like that? Or some other way?

So on the subject of “dragon traits.” Can she…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

OOOO I love the sketchiness of the lines. I think Finnegan is my favorite of the two, but I really like the way you did Helena’s hands.

@kyronthearcanin Whoa!! So I know what a seer is, and I’m pretty sure I know what shifter implies…..but dragonborn?? What does it mean?

(You don’t need to tell me if you don’t want to.)

@kyronthearcanin

At least you’re aware of it. That’s good. 🙂

It does get easier to write with unique voice though as you keep writing because you get to know your characters more. 😀

Y’all gotta read this. XD

This is half of chapter one and all of chapter two from one of the first book I tried to write when I was 8 or 9. (Basically the first part of the chapter was where a 10 year-old girl named Zoey was outside and she got sucked into this tornado thing. XD) (Oh, and I’m leaving all the spelling, grammar, and positioning to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh my word, I love that! XD I love reading old writing compared to recent writing. Lol

@kyronthearcanin

Ok… 😏😁

(Oh, and I added something to my post up there. I don’t know if you missed it.)

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so I love the young thief trope. 😂 (When it’s done right of course 😉 ) So I think Brycen might end up being one of my favorites. 😁

Yeah, I figured I’d have to move some stuff around once the drafting was done. But hey, I’ll just surprise myself and magically have double the chapters that way XD

Right? XD

@euodia-vision Aggh, I messed up your tag!!

@whalekeeper There’s no problem with liking what you like, so long as it’s not explicitly conflicting with your beliefs, and you’re not forcing someone else who thinks it does present a problem to read it (which you aren’t). The story actually kinda interested me, even though I don’t usually like that sort of genre, and even though I’m not likely…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 Go right ahead!

Kunen is another pelgarkine, right? Allen’s’ not gonna be too keen on another one, lol. Or maybe they might get along, idk……

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, so on chapter 2:

Interesting, I don’t think I have any major critiques or anything on this one. As for Nia, I wouldn’t call her a villain, though she is a minor conflict. I don’t think she’s overboard at all, she’s just not a very likeable character currently, so if that’s what you were aiming for, I think you did great!…[Read more]

@euodia.vision Those are cool! That one’s eyes don’t look too creepy. Just remember that human characters’ eyes are about the same space apart as they are wide.

@whalekeeper

Oh I love that!! Such a cute story! I want to know the next part!! 😀

And that last section…

What is an Elder? They are older than Ancient Ones, but not as ancient as the Old One.

XDXDXD That’s awesome. And I bet it made perfect sense to you back then, and now you’re just like “Oh my gosh. What in the world was I thinking?!”

XDXD

@princesachronicle22

Okay! It’s good with me! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

Okay! Sounds good 😊

@lightoverdarkness6 probably take a break for a bit since I’m a bit busy now too and haven’t been on much 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Hey girl! So since Freedom won’t be on for a while, do you want to go ahead and RP? We could probably put in a few more characters if we need to, and then take them back out when Freedom gets back? Idk, just thinking out loud here. Or we could just take a break from this RP for a bit until she gets back?

What do u think?