Felicity

@whalekeeper HAHAHA

it is though

I was going to share my thoughts, but then this thread would start to become redundant, lol! I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said. And as for the passage people keep referencing about food offered to idols and becoming a stumbling block, that’s 1 Corinthians 8.

also what did you do to the URL to get it to temporarily admin-ify you?

@linus-smallprint It’s cool how you took classes or something for this kinda thing!

That would be cool too, I’d totally give my feedback if you did it.

@savannah_grace2009

No worries! I’ll pm you my email real fast :))

@ellette-giselle ohhhh ok!

cool emblem too!

^Are they siblings/cousins.

@ellette-giselle I don’t know, but they look pretty similar, so….

@ellette-giselle oooh new main characters!!!

Are they related? or no?

Looks like they’re defectors from the army!

Honestly, I would love that, but there’s one little problem with Wix. I’ve been on two Wix-created sites, and they start off great, but something about them just……dies really easily and they become ghost towns with like maybe a single post every two weeks or something.

@liberty

oooh, is he the villain? or a character who’s on the good side but doesn’t have good intentions?

thoughts:

-he’s either a legitimate heir who shouldn’t be on the throne for some reason but is/wants to be, or a usurper.

-he has a pet crow or raven

-he’s killed before and will kill again

-someone close to him died or he lost…[Read more]

And technically he’s from Quebec, do some stuff is in French. Which is certainly interesting, just not helpful. O_o

@whalekeeper

That would be lovely. I might just have to recruit you, if I can find stuff.

I did find something called the Youth Act, but while it had a lot of instructions for foster organizations, it didn’t seem to have any for a kid who has no parents left.

@whalekeeper

Any call for assistance is greatly appreciated. I have no clue who to tag.

(Totally didn’t freak out when I realized that since this book is technically set in the real world it has to at least look believable, and I can’t just write the law myself. Fantasy author problems)

@theducktator

Well, it wasn’t Google’s expertise either.…[Read more]

@hybridlore @theducktator @shadow

Thank you ladies sooo much for the feedback!! It makes me even more excited to dive into the third draft! <33

@linus-smallprint yeah if you made another site I’d join it!

@grcr

Oh my word. Those are hilarious.

No, I can’t say I’ve wondered that particular question, but I do get that type of thing. Like wondering what you call an albino bluebird.

To the fear question:

Zlati is flight (his more natural response) and then fight (the response he’s leaned to survive his brother)

Vulka…well, you kind of have to feel fear to have a response. He doesn’t like that emotion, so he laughs till it changes to something else. Then it’s fight, because it’s always fight, even when there is nothing, or…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Ron, yeah, but I like Jason a lot too!