Felicity

@keilah-h

That would be so cool!

@smiley

Thank you! 🙂

Yelena would be a really cool cosplay!

No idea what downtown abby is but I hope you have fun!!

@loopylin Thanks!

@sarafini

Sure! Why don’t you post it in the worldbuilding topic, If I have time with all my schoolwork I’d love to read it!

@keilah-h

Fangirl appreciates.

XD

@whalekeeper

Hey Whale, just wanted to check in. I know you’ve been active, but haven’t made any response on this forum, so I’m perpetually worried that I may have offended you in any way by my words. In clarifying my meaning, I touched on some more sensitive topics, and I don’t want you to feel attacked or hurt in what I was saying. As you know…[Read more]

@hybridlore IKR??

it was the strangest thing.

@aranel

Yes, it’s somewhat of a passion of mine.

Cool! Do you intend to embody that in your own writing?

Yes, same. I would like to try a story with soft worldbuilding, but it would take a lot of careful planning.

Yeah, it would be interesting to give a go. If I was ever to try it, I would probably blend it with hard worldbuilding, where there’s p…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

So I just read up to chapter 10, and it definitely has removed the issue of plot jumps. It still is jumping from so many POVs that it’s hard to connect with the characters on a deeper level yet, but once you start cycling back to Lilitu and Sef and whoever else, I think it should be fine.

I like Marcurious’s character as…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings That’s cool! i’d cosplay as the female version of the charrie on my profile pic, or one of the others in his squad, if I could 3D print the armor or something. That would be awesome.

@trailblazer ugh that’s hard, most of the characters I’m talking about are male lol

if I were to bring a female in too, I’d violate the “one character so as not to make it too chaotic” rule

@rae ok! I’ll pull one out from a bunch I have.

@rae cool! I like how you used the same “comes from a crystal” concept but made it different.

I don’t have very many Mandalorian characters I’m working on now, except one who really doesn’t count…..but I do have a few Republic commandos, some of which were trained by Mandalorians and have a little bit of the same system in place.

random fact for those who want to hear it

Star Wars has a movie in the works depicting what’ll happen to the galaxy right after the Empire’s fall, before movies 7-9 happen.

They aren’t sure who to cast as Luke Skywalker (who will probably appear), since his original actor, Mark Hamill, is too old to do it now.

One of the weirder choices on the…[Read more]

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @rae

Hedieh

Hedieh did a quick twirl in front of the mirror, watching the skirt of her dress spin around her. She bounced on her toes, happy to be wearing the sparkling, baby pink ball gown. It was her favorite color.

She did one last check of her hair and makeup, then…[Read more]

@rae ooh is your character from a sci-fi or something??

most of my charries in the RPs are from Star Wars fanfics so they’d get what he’s talking about lol. Might even like the lightsaber thingy.

I still haven’t figured out who to add here though.

@savannah_grace2009

And then something came over her.

In one deft motion, she let go of his hand and shoulder and wrapped her arms around his waist, pressing the side of her face against his vest in an embrace. She took a few shuddering breaths, trying to keep control of herself. She was not going to cry.

Once Hugo recovered from his shock, she…

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@scoutfinch180

I don’t have time to look at the whole thing, but from the first ones, It’s really good! I don’t see anything really I would change. I personally like large lettering, but that might not be your taste. Your poses are so dynamic! In general, the flow is really good, and the smaller panels to show details are a great addition. I…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Oh it’s totally fine! And I’m not here to tell you what you can and can’t write and draw, I just know SE has a older and probably more tolerant audience than KP does. As long as you’re following the KP guidelines it’s ok! They say that as a general rule of thumb don’t post anything you would not feel comfortable with a 6-year-old…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

I don’t think it works! You can upload it picture by picture if you like.

And welcome from story embers! My sister is from SE and told me about the forum shut down. It’s too bad, but I hope you like it over here! You might want to be aware that because we have an age cap on kp (only for young adults, until 30) we attract a much…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, awesome! I’ll take a look then!

@savannah_grace2009

You definitely fixed a lot. Though I still think you got to connect the chapters a bit more, like how did Lilitu and Sef end up in the woods and why are they being hunted, as well as their relationship. You’ve might have already done this though, and simply not posted it on KP, have you done it on reedsy already, I’ll have to check.

@scoutfinch180

Hi! Nice to meet you, we haven’t met, but welcome back to KP!

Links have always been an issue on KP for as long as I’ve been on here. I’ve gotten by through simply pasting the link, then making a space after the first h, so it isn’t registered as a link, but others can copy it and remove the space to get access.

@scoutfinch180

Well, I see the link you posted. I’m not sure if that’s what you want or not. If you haven’t already, maybe try the link button at the top of the response box? 🤷🏻‍♀️ idk