Felicity

@keilah-h

XD that’s a mood. I’m that way with a lot of things until I finally decide to watch it.

Yeah, makes sense. Oh yeah lol, I used to watch that guy a lot. There’s a messy side to some minecraft youtube, no need for any elaboration.

Yeah I personally really like it, but I only watch his single player vids, because with multiplayer games…[Read more]

@rae Prepare to get a not-particularly-detailed history of the Star Wars prequel series with a bit of extra dragon bits

lol

Tech

“Elves are common in the world I have just came from. Though, there is a world I know that they are only objects of fantasy.” Ru smiled, slightly nervous. “Um, if you know, what’s the name of your home planet, Tech?”…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings TBH I haven’t seen the Jurassic Park/World trilogies either but I devour everything based off it lol.

and yeah….I watch only informative Minecraft videos (My brother and I just came across a series where the guy asks for dumb Redstone ideas on his social media and then builds them. Like a vault door that runs away from you…[Read more]

@loopylin nice drawings!!

@freedomwriter76 wow, that looks really good!

@smiley ok, confession, my family’s been watching Disney movies because we’re going on the Disney cruise line on the 21st……

and there’s a bit more to it, but I’ll explain that when I write my “I won’t be on for a week because of my vacation” post.

@freedomwriter76

Hi! How are you doing? I was thinking about you today and hope your doing good 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning.

What??? I’ve always found it funny when characters do that. Especially in movies. I guess it’s different there since you’re seeing it, but I don’t think it’s be that bad in a book.

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

He dropped his gaze to the floor and didn’t speak for a moment. “I’m not offended… I just…” He sighed, tossing his bangs out of his eyes with a flip of his head. “I guess I am a little… self-centered, am I?” He gave a quick chuckle. “I just don’t want to… to lose her…” he softly said the last part, but pasted on a smile…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, I see your point. It’s kinda all throughout Marvel, and you just have to decide when it goes too far for you.

I haven’t seen Jurassic park actually!

Ack, yeah. I used to watch a lot of minecraft, but tbh some of the creators were actively feeding that side the the fandom… yuck. I still watch Ethoslab’s lets play occasionally…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

It’s Pietro!! : D

@loopylin

I love that drawing of Dante, it has so much character!

@jonas

Ok, that makes more sense. I was gonna ask, what frame of reference does it stop in motion, so the infinite inertia idea does kinda help. I’ll still have to ponder on how that works on the temporal aspect though.

@jonas

Interesting! I love the high contrast magic systems. Giving me Star Wars vibes actually with the light side and dark side users, and grey Jedi. Question on the positive temporal pulse. What does it mean for the object to be frozen in time, and therefore unmovable?

(I’ve rewritten the beginning of my main WIP so many times. 🤣)

@savannah_grace2009

Okay! Yeah, I get that and I’ve been trying to work on that.

Awesome!

Okay so question-I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning. So should I change how I start the story? I’d still have the same scene where Neveah tells Sef that sh…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

Though Ransom could just be a nickname some people call him…

@whalekeeper

He sounds awesome!!

Some name ideas…

• Axel
• Jett
• Orion
• Zayn
• Roscoe
• Benedict
• Kieran

It’s weird, because it’s less of an “Oh, I’d marry this character if I could” kind of a thing, and more of a just “Wow. He’s awesome.” kind of a thing. I’m strange like that, idk.

@scoutfinch180 thanks for the advice!

Uncanny valley…..yeah, plenty of my drawings have gone there. Since I mostly draw fan art, I can tell when I got a character so wrong it’s not even funny.

and LOL about the marrying Legolas part. Y’know, I’ve never found him hyper-attractive. Like, he’s the kinda guy that I can think “Wow, the female elves…[Read more]