Felicity

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

He chuckled, his cheeks flushing. “I wouldn’t say scary… I’m just not as bold as most people.” He didn’t feel like telling her he was worried she’s say no.

Ah well there are very painful primetive tattoes, using a sharpened stick thingy and hitting the end lightly with a hammer. The stick is dipped in ink, and when hit with the hammer, pokes the person skin a little bit (It’s just a tap, I don’t think it goes super deep) I don’t know a whole lot about it, but I know that tattoes like this have…[Read more]

@smiley

yess that song!!

@freedomwriter76

Oh interesting…

@freedomwriter76

Oh my goodness I am crying 🥺😭😭

This is not allowed to be this sad, they are not allowed to be this lovable 🥺🥺😭😭💔❤

I love this even tho I’ll probably go into a slight depression reading it 🥺🥺

@trailblazer

That’s awesome, I love it! 😂

Oh and yeah, I have a love-hate relationship with science/math too. Science can be cool, but some days I do NOT love it. XD

@savannah_grace2009

We’re learning earth science rn so there’s not that much to break our brains…lol but  yeah…math is one of those things that breaks my brain sometimes. But for some reason I still love it!!!

Yeah, not that much, lol! I’m taking physical science, so it’s a little bit of physics and all the fundamental forces of the universe. Ya…[Read more]

@canadalily

So glad you liked my blog. Thanks for checking it out. I am working really hard on it!

Yeah, it looks great!

What is my dream vacay? I would like to visit Newfoundland sometime. It might be a kind of strange destination, but I am not really into the touristy stuff. Newfoundland sounds cool (literally. The snow there is crazy!)

No that…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Yeah, but it’s not a big deal… after all, without Xandro I don’t know if I’d ever get up the guts to ask you to the dance.” His cheeks flushed at this sudden boldness. Maybe Fynn was rubbing off on him…

@evelyn-collins yeah I couldn’t deal with that idea either, so I was making sure we were on the same page in that regard lol

@evelyn-collins ok so idea for you, since you said you haven’t fully figured out everything between Leo and Crosshair.

I was thinking quite a bit about Leo’s circumstances before Varian showed up, and tbh, the actions of Leo’s mother and the fact that she doesn’t seem to know her dad (otherwise she might have thought he looked familiar? Cross’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yes!! XD He’s an awesome teacher. He’s totally a science nerd, but he’s like super smart. He’s said some things during class that have temporarily broken my brain. And then my brother just laughs at me when I tell him about it. 😂

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you so much for all this advice!! I’ll definitely be applying it.

Which story is this by the way? Is this a new one?

Not a new one. It’s actually my dystopian trilogy that I’ve been working on for over a year now. It keeps changing as I mature as a writer and lately I’ve been really focusing on revamping the first book be…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

*everyone ignore that i just referred to my espresso as a “he”…XD”

It’s okay, my science teacher refers to atoms as “he”s. 😂

@esther-c

(It deleted my post for some reason)

So I just saw the other comments saying that the setting isn’t as big a deal. Personally I think setting is very important, but it also depends on who you are as the author, and what kind of story you want to write.

Your not over thinking it for being concerned about whether your setting is playing…[Read more]

@esther-c

So I just saw the other comments saying that the setting isn’t as big a deal. Personally I think setting is very important, but it also depends on who you are as the author, and what kind of story you want to write.

Your not over thinking it for being concerned about whether your setting is playing an active role or not, but you also…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Maybe @thearcaneaxiom could help? (Sorry if she already tagged you.)

No problem, thanks for the tag!

@esther-c

So this is a good thing to be aware of when writing your story. Your definitely right that you want to have your setting more tied into the plot. I like how Brandon Sanderson puts it: Character, setting, and conflict are the three pieces, and the plot is the glue that keeps them together in a story.

You care about your characters,…[Read more]

@canadalily

Patricia MacLachlan was a children’s author, yes. But I still find her books interesting. Her most well known, “Sarah, Plain and Tall,” would be about the thickness of a thin beginner’s novel, if that gives you any idea. I’m not sure how to classify her genre. You can read a sample of “Sarah, Plain and Tall” on Amazon to give you an i…

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