@felicity
Active 3 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin You can totally join!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Were the characters believable?
I think they were!
Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?
Seemed pretty individual to me.
What would you say was the message of the story?
What would you say my world view was?
Hmmmm…. I’m terrible with deducing messages and intentions, so I can’t really tell, but that’s my fault, not…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yeah I saw them! Answering them in a sec!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin @ellette-giselle
*Nearly tags myself on accident*
Leo
“Sure.” He smiled down at the girls. Their tails were something to get used to, but he had seen weirder things here.
The hall was long and curved, so that in a few paces they had lost sight of the others. Soon the somber red doors have way to bright yellows…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Oh girl…that broken violin scene makes me want to go get out my baby and hug it. Like, ugh.
*Strokes violin case*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
she probably thinks he’s really boring haha
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Crosshair
“Let’s go questing!!” Ayla brandished her sword out in front of her as she walked.
Crosshair rolled his eyes. Tech or Omega or even Feather probably would’ve enjoyed this more, but none of them were here.
“Stop being so obvious.” he hissed. “If there are in fact guards or dragons or whatever, you yelling and waving that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.
To each their own then! I have no problem with that lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 4 weeks ago
question: what do you think of the Seven year jump forward ending?
Hmm, I don’t mind it. It’s a little strange if your second book is going to pick up right where this one left off, but that’s not a bad thing.
were you sad Aaron died?
Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@esther-c Bruhhh that’s so random
but it’s cool!
I’ve been to Italy and it’s amazing.
The north and the south regions of the country basically consider themselves two different cultures, haha. I’ve only been to the south. The people there were generally nice.
I’ll have to ask my mom about this, she remembers more than me haha
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Yep sort of. I meant guys dressing as girls, or vise versa. So yeah. It’s gross and called some pretty strong names in the Bible.
XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Welp… turns out my characters are going to Italy!!!
I had a totally different plot planned for this story, but after some brainstorming, I’ve come up with a plot that is ten times better!! The only problem is… I’ve never been to Italy…. I’ve been doing some research on customs and culture, but there’s nothing like hearing firsthand experience. H…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@theducktator ok thanks!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@theducktator ahhh forgot!!
where were we?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@koshka yeah she’s crazy lol
and yeah I don’t like crossdressing either, if by crossdressing you mean guys in skirts or girls in tuxes or something like that. Eeeyagh, just thinking about what that’d look like is making me cringe.
I mean, I hate wearing dresses or skirts and would rather have a (modest) pair of pants, but I’m sure that’s not…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed very good points!
also yeah braces stink from what I’ve heard. I’m glad I got the plastic things instead of the metal wires, but I know a lot of people who need braces can’t get those cause they only work for certain conditions. And I still had to get a few little metal anchors in my mouth for rubber bands to attach to, and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Oh gracious. I remember braces. I drank a lot of soup/broth, and yogurt. Anything that didn’t require teeth.
I don’t have anything to add to that so- *nods* Well put.
Also, Leon you poor baby. I’ll always care for you even if you are as mixed up as a crushed bag of tortilla chips. *Offers a mug of tea and cookies*
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Yeah kp for three years I don’t think you have one we haven’t seen XD Except maybe you’re fantasy characters. I can’t really remember what Fin looks like too well anyways so It’s ok. If everyone else is on board then who cares lol
Btw I love the new pfp XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 4 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed oooh I loved his character in the book! I’ll be participating in this one!
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Fair 😂😂 I just don’t like yogurt 🤪
Also, I know braces hurt, but in the end it will be worth it!! I had braces for two years, but when I got them off, Â my smile looked so much better!
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