@felicity
Active 3 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 days, 16 hours ago
No girl, I love it! I think the key to writing chaotic scenes is pacing. Like if you have a lot of long sentences people are going to get confused, but in your case, you stuck to shorter/mid-length sentences and sprinkled in only a few long ones. It worked really well 👌
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
@rae coming back to our convo from yesterday lol
You have your Aussie, I have my Aussie, and I wouldn’t switch for the world.
The utter absurdity of this phrase though.
How did you decide upon Soldier’s? I’m really curious why he’s part bird (sorry, I don’t remember the species name) with honey-smelling feathers lol
He’s an Ornithifo…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 16 hours ago
ok but that’s unusually accurate lol
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
Aww, so sweet! 🥹
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Esther replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 days, 16 hours ago
Love it!! I love your writing style so much actually! I’m not sure what it is, but something about it makes it easy and engaging to read 🤩
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 16 hours ago
Since everyone’s made up and there is peace in the kingdom of pen again…..
Magic potato, havoc potato, what am I?
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 16 hours ago
Love the aesthetics!!! They look so good!! 🤩
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 days, 16 hours ago
Awwww, so fun! (Why do your grown characters still ignite the “poor little babies” part of my brain?)
Also…what does Nikolai look like perchance? And have you done a collage for him? (If you haven’t…well now, I don’t know a whole lot about his story, but I think I’ve caught his drift)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 11 hours ago
Good. That’s what I assumed was happening.
The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later.
I’m afraid I was more concerned over the emotional/psychological aspect, but I suppose that’s kinda what you meant.
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*Cackles*
Oh, and I wasn’t sad. I was almost angry. Slightly mad. Highly miffed. And rather sorry for…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 11 hours ago
*Glares*
You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.
*Huffs*
*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*
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As to the last section…
This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 11 hours ago
@the_lost-journal that’s ok.
now that you’re no longer angry at me, I will leave this to between you and Ellette.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 11 hours ago
And yes if your brother joins I’d love to see his drawings!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 11 hours ago
I wouldn’t switch for the world
me neither lol
i’d rather have a guy who’s fictional and is thus 0% aware of my obsession with him.
I have to get off now and don’t have time to explain any more but I’ll explain more about my creatures tomorrow if I can! And yes, go ahead and write whatever short stories you want! (I’d love to see them…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 11 hours ago
@the_lost-journal I SAID SORRY. And I meant it.
sometimes I say things without thinking and everyone calls me insensitive.
I’ll shut up now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 11 hours ago
I wasn’t trying to make fun of you. I’m easily triggered too in real life (I have autism)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 11 hours ago
@the_lost-journal sheesh! No! I thought it was kinda cute.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 11 hours ago
@the_lost-journal it’s not funny to me that you guys are fighting, but I have to laugh at things that make me depressed to make me less depressed. Sorry.
your upset potato profile pic though
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 12 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal y’all gotta learn to get along lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 12 hours ago
I mean like the Sunekite species were partially inspired by your Nagas. I actually considered calling them that but didn’t want to take your species name.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 12 hours ago
@grcr lollll
It’ll probably take me a while to get another animation out but I’m looking to do a lot more now that I know what to do.
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