Felicity

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Snowball!!!!!

(If you can)

@ellette-giselle

*Splutter* Texans weren’t made for this much snow!

Three more steps. Calion stood gazing over the edge into the chasm below. A river threaded it’s way down there, cutting a blue seam through a rolling green wood. A mile, two, down. A misty cloud rolled by, blocking the view and pulling his gaze back to the jagged edge just a…[Read more]

@liberty

GAHHHHH *falls backward wildly scrubbing snow from my face*

Thirty miles off the coast of Norway. Waves crash against the Kampørn’s prow. The styrimaðr leaned his full weight against the helm to fight the churning. His eyes strained against the spray for his first glimpse of home. He grit his teeth. Swallowed the spay. Called for the s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh popycock. For one thing I actually quite liked your story. For another, style isn’t that big of a deal. It’s mostly a challenge to make every word count.

But I understand if you don’t join. Some writers don’t enjoy that challenge as much as others, or whatever. *Shrug* XD

@whalekeeper

She’d definitely want to know if someone else was describing him like that 😳😂

@whalekeeper

Oh yes… 😏 He’s one of the MCs in my current WIP, but this snippet was from the POV of his girlfriend (pretty much fiancée, let’s be real gang). 😜

@whalekeeper

Oooo, yes! Like I said, I adore this stuff.

🫸🏻⚪️ @liberty

🫸🏻⚪️ @savannah_grace2009

Forgot about my snowballs, but got them written! I know I don’t have to share a snippet buuuuut….. I really want to. 🤣 So here you go:
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“Don’t try to turn her down.” Mrs. Palmer stood beside me, a knowing smile on her lips.

“Who?”

“Marzia. This is her way of accepting you into the family. She’ll be offended if you don’t let her spoil you.”…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

*Squeals back* Doesn’t it? =D

(Ooooo…I did not think of this)

@ellette-giselle cool, what time period is this?

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!!

Do you…eh…want me to rescue them? Live sort of ambushed me for a little while.

(oooooops)

@ellette-giselle

Good good!! A poignant ending, bittersweet but victorious.

Ah, I still think you could do something even shorter if you didn’t introduce it, but that’s also part of your writing style, I think, so I won’t prod.

@ellette-giselle ohhhhh

that makes sense

also I like the covers for the books!

@ellette-giselle exactly how i like them lol

@theducktator that’s a good plan

@highscribeofaetherium @koshka haha I guess “not eating them” is a color then lol

@liberty

It is! Like poetry made of prose. I adore this stuff.

@ellette-giselle

My shortest one was 400, and I hardly set the stage

Flash fiction. The strength is in what you don’t say. Don’t worry about setting the stage, introducing characters, or anything like that. Snap a picture of a heart. Let poetry dance with prose.

I’m kinda sorry, but also definitely not. I absolutely love flash fiction, but have b…[Read more]