Felicity

@thearcaneaxiom

That’s super neat! It looks like waves, or a group of dancing sting rays maybe. How’d you make it?

@thearcaneaxiom

Argggh!! I hate that when I’m reading a book, but I used to do it a lot in my own writing. One time it was this random drink that I had made up, and I thought it was sooo neat!!! (it was, if I do say so myself, but the reader could care less.)

@kyronthearcanin

Exactly. Exactly. Exactly!!! That happened to me just this morning actually.

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, makes sense now. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

(No I didn’t forget about this, 🙂 I just had a busy week.)

(Yeah! I’d love to continue if we can be respectful about it, I just knew this to be a big point of contention for many.)

(Ok! Though we will differ, and I’m going to state what I believe and why, I will try to be as respectful as possible. You’re right. I can’t speak f…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Great poem! I love how you based it off of Psalm 19! I think everyone else gave some good suggestions for punctuation, so I won’t say much, except, keep up the good work! 😉

@kyronthearcanin

I just caught up on the parts you posted since I was on here last!

When did Brycen hit Tali? I was a bit confused there, but really interested in seeing where you’re going with this Atticus guy. 😉

@elanor

I feel like that Homeward Bound poem all the time! I think it’s because of the end times we live in. I never thought I’d wish for heaven so much but sometimes this world just seems hopeless. But…it’s not. Jesus is our hope. Thanks for sharing!

@esther-c

What’s that? I’ve never heard of it, sry. 😅

No problem. It’s a movie (rather cheesy….hopefully my younger siblings don’t hear me say that…😅) Anyway it has a dog-like creature in it that flies who is a Lucky “dragon” and brings good luck. Also, the MC has to save the planet from this darkness stuff that’s taking over, and he has to…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Welllll, Felicity, it really was a poem from the soul 😅🥰

I guess that’s why, then. Those are the best. 💕

@everyone

Here’s a poem I penned (actually typed 😉 ) in March, when the landscape was dull and frozen and Spring seemed light years away.

The Moment Before Spring

March 16, 23

Under the panicked sparrow chirps,

Under the water’s sigh

Blanketing landscape in it’s grip

Cold shadows proudly lie.

Stealing away the songs of mirth,

Freezing…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Thanks! I really like this part of yours!

Up and through and by and with

In dark storms or peaceful bliss

Down and out and up and in

He’s trustworthy; don’t forget.

@starshiness

Love your poem For My Sake. I could tell by the first line that it was about a sister!! 😉 I have four sisters and this line is so true:  Because I…[Read more]

@she-is-a-pirate

These are the ranks:

Your first post, you are a Bumbling Henchman
20 posts: you become a Charismatic Rebel
50 posts: Wise Jester
100 posts: Loyal Sidekick
300 posts: Knight in Shining Armor
1000 posts: Eccentric Mentor
2000 posts: Chosen One

I looked up a pic of a corgi/healer mix and they are beautiful dogs! Ours is a German…[Read more]

@she-is-a-pirate

1. Ah, I see. Thanks for the advice. I will certainly keep rum and loyalty in mind when dealing with pirates.

2. Well, both I guess. 😉 Do you have any pets in real life? My family has a dog and a flock of chickens, which includes four mostly friendly roosters.

3. Awesome!

@acancello

Ok! Here it is! Feel free to critique it as needed. This was written very hurriedly because I was supposed to be making lunch…but I knew if I didn’t write it down I’d loose it. 🙂

To the Friend I Once Knew

Years have passed since we’ve been in touch

The friendship we shared has faded,

Drifting into memories I envy so much,

Our…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

(This is actually a point where our theologies may differ, I knew that would be the case, so my fault for bringing it up😅)

(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, that’s so sad! 😢😢😢 I see how it can give Kylie her aha moment tho…but still.

Yeah. 😢

@godlyfantasy12

And Felicity, I would offer that in your book while your theme is awesome! Maybe make sure to provide that not All people are like Kylie’s friend. I do understand the theme you’re going for “Trusting God over man” but some people go to the extreme to the point of hating his creation and never opening their hearts again to the ones…

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@she-is-a-pirate

Hello and welcome! I have never met a real pirate in my life and I am greatly honored. *drops a curtsy* I’m Felicity, a homesteader, follower of Jesus and a lover of writing. 😉

Your WIP sounds a lot of fun to write! I like writing Historical fiction as well, but more recently I’m trying my hand at contemporary.

Following with…[Read more]