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Snapper replied to the topic Before you hear it from DeGraaf… in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Ah, it’s fine. *waves talons passively* Sarcasm is found in many forms, (as everyone who’s read Ranger’ Apprentice knows: thanks Halt) No need to explain. 🙂 😀 (dragons understand people quite well, actually) 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Before you hear it from DeGraaf… in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Ah, it’s fine. Sarcasm is found in many forms, (as everyone who’s read Ranger’ Apprentice knows: thanks Halt) No need to explain. (dragons understand people quite well, actually) 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy Well, twue. Yeah. Twue. But I still like the relationships.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien I haven’t either. Is it good even though he died?
But guys, even though they ruined Kili in the movie with Tauriel, they did deepen his relationship with Thorin and Fili and Bilbo!! Doesn’t that count for something? I love that aspect, even though it wasn’t in the book. Doesn’t anyone else think so?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic I Need a Title in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I think @Daeus meant it as a reference to that song. 🙂
@Anne-of-Lothlorien, I think that would be a really good one, with “I’ll Fly Away” being the song the boy sings.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 12 months ago
Yep, British period dramas (but not Pride and Prejudice and the Zombies. 😀 ) Have you seen any? I’d definitely recommend North and South, though if you’re a sci-fi geek that might not be your sort of thing. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic I Need a Title in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
I’ll Fly Away sounds like the song…anyone know what I’m talking about? 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic I Need a Title in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
@hope @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @Julia-r @clairec @winter-rose @overcomer @rolena-hatfield @anne-swiftblade @spradlin @aratrea @his-instrument @ingridrd @gretald @jadamae @Christi-eaton @jess @aella
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Hrrm…we-ell…here are some suggestions that come to mind.
The Song
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Leviathan in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
@R-E-P Yeah, the way you incorporated the Leviathan passage was neat. 🙂
I only found a few misspellings: common place=commonplace, sir-coat=surcoat, and a foot=afoot. Also when you use the word ‘it’s’, as in ‘it’s place’, you shouldn’t have an apostrophe. If you do, that means ‘it is’. That took me a bit to learn, since other words use…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Hang Out with KP Staff Next Friday! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
*snaps fingers disconsolately* Unfortunately, I can’t. Sorry guys.
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Snapper replied to the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 9 years, 12 months ago
Yahoo! That’s incredigreat!!! Congradulations! @bluejay
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 9 years, 12 months ago
@Bluejay Oh wow! Good job! *thunderous applause* 😀 😀 😀
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 12 months ago
To Anyone and Everyone or No One Whom it may concern (or just the people who were on my introductory post when I got an account 🙂 @Christi-Eaton @Hope @Daeus @Rolena-Hatfield @Faithdk @Bluejay @Sarah-h @JadaMae @Writefury @Gretald ): Maybe you remember when I got an account, I said I was not going to be regular, and only post occasionally. When I…[Read more]
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And…wow that was long. Sorry ’bout that. 😛
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@emma-flournoy Well yay, I’m glad you like it here so much! You add a lot of fun to the group, in case you didn’t know. Especially that first time when you hijacked Kate’s account. 🙂
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Aww, thanks Sarah. 😀
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Yay! I’m glad you’ll be on here more. 🙂 You have a lot of insightful writing comments and critiques, and like @sarah-h said, this group of KeePers wouldn’t be the same without you. 😉-
Thanks Greta. That really means a lot. 🙂
I won’t just be on here ALL the time–I am trying to work on making sure I use my time in the wisest way I can—but I will be posting more that just very seldom. 😀
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@emma-flournoy I’m glad you’re going to be on here more often.
Hey, I’m editing the GC at the moment and some of your comments are so funny. I love the ones about Jenz. 🙂
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Thanks, Tessa. 🙂
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Err…you know I was joking, right? 😛 @Bluejay
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Well…I kind figured that, but it was a bit hard to tell. You see, I knew Jenz was your fav, and then you go and say Lucas is. Maybe I should have warned you that I am the type of person who takes everything seriously. 🙂 But I can laugh at myself when some looks at me and says, “Um it was a joke.” 🙂
Does that make any sense at all? 😛
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Well, I thought I’d said Jenz was my favorite enough that you’d know I was joking…Lucas was my least favorite. 😛 Sorry… 😀 Glad you’re not offended. 😉
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Haha. No worries. That clears that problem up. 😉 I have finished going through and fixing up the Golden Conch with your critiques. Would you like it back to read it again? And to red text again? 🙂
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Yes I would like to read it again! Do you want me to red text again? 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@Daeus
I know I haven’t read your book, though Kate’s told me stuff about it (I hear it’s really good. I.e., genius. 😀 ). But I’m sorry you’re having this difficulty, and I’m going to be praying.That article sounds like a really good idea, btw. Writing out thoughts helps me better understand them too.
I hope you get everything fixed to the…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Help Me, Help You, Help…er…The World? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@Aratrea That’s going to be so helpful; thanks a lot.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 12 months ago
Oh yes, Horatio Hornblower—yes, all those. Anything Kate says, I definitely do too. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 12 months ago
Oh yes, Horatio Hornblower—yes, all those. Anything Kate says, definitely. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 12 months ago
Oh yes, Horatio Hornblower—yes, all those. Anything Kate says, definitely. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hiring! Requirements: General Helpfulness in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 12 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield Oh no, not much practice in that department at all. 😛
Good luck on all of your story. 🙂
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