Faith Kindred

Ohio here as well… 🙂

Random fact of the day— we are currently suffering through the primaries of our presidential election, which happens every four years. And as @Daeus mentioned, today is Super Tuesday, which is special only because a great many of the states vote at one time.
And this election has been by far the craziest one I’ve ever…[Read more]

I live in the bestistest state.

… Oh, that’s Ohio by the way.

Random facts about the USA:
.We have the world’s biggest hole in the ground.
.We are a republic, not a democracy (despite popular opinion)
.In the US, (at least it’s supposed to be this way) each state is more than just a division of the country with its own lower government. State…[Read more]

Wow! Thanks so much both of you. I will have to sit down and fix it up. This is going to make it so much better. 😀

@ivy-rose In my story Princess Tess and the Perfect Story my narrator talks to Tess. She refers to Tess’s parent by the King and Queen. But if the narrator was talking to you as you read the book I would probably say something like this. “Then Tess’s parents looked out the window. I probably wouldn’t use their proper names. I don’t know if this in…[Read more]

@ivy-rose In my story Princess Tess and the Perfect Story my narrator talks to Tess. She refers to Tess’s parent by the King and Queen. But if the narrator was talking to you as you read the book I would probably say something like this. “Then Tess’s parents looked out the window. I probably wouldn’t use their proper names. I don’t know if this in…[Read more]

@writefury I feel silly but I didn’t know there was a difference. 🙂 I think I’m doing 3rd person limited…I’m writing in Deep Point Of View if you are familiar with that.
(Totally off subject….I wanted to let you know that I will be at the Christian Heritage conference and I’d love to meet you! If you want to send me an email through my…[Read more]

I’m curious. What do you like about it, Sarah? Does it just publish to nook, or other retailers as well?

I’ve never used it, but I’ve heard of it. My impression is that it is a reputable company. That doesn’t mean it is the right one for you though.

Sure Tessa,

Stanza 1: “In a land long ago” might be better than “in a land far away”.

Stanza 2: “I’ll wipe out human”. It’s often ok to break gramar rules in poetry, but I wouldn’t end a sentence with an adjetive.

Stanza 3: I think the last two lines would flow better if you said, “His name was Noah. God drew him a plan.”

Stanza 5: Instead…[Read more]

@bluejay Nope, no snow in this area. Just rain and cold. And more rain. XP Hey, that would be a fun topic! I think it’s been determined that we have a lot of people from Ohio already.

Cool, @daeus! I think we’re pretty nearby him, in that case. A reasonably short drive. 🙂

I would change some things…

The first verse… not sure what to suggest, but it sounds a little off from the rest of the poem. “And made Him so mad” is a huge understatement, which might work fine for this poem, but this line could be a lot stronger.
“Some seven of, some two” would sound better written as “Some of seven, some of two.”
“He…[Read more]

Ooo, virtual ice cream! I’ve have chocolate, please. 😛

No problem! 🙂

And I used PicMonkey for my profile pic. It’s really handy.

Where in Washington? My Grandpa lives in Puyallup near Tacoma and Seattle. (I assume you mean the state)

@reaganramm Thanks. I was still learning the ropes when I posted this. 😀 And once I finally realized how it all work it was too late for me to change it. ;P
Btw: How did you get a profile pic like yours? Did you use Photoshop?

So @writefury you’re from Washington? That’s awesome. I should start a topic called “where are you from in the USA?” I wonder if we would get one for each state? 😀 Have you got snow??? 😛

Hey! I just moved this to Novel Ideas because “Start Here” is for new members to introduce themselves. 🙂