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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

Wait up! *puff puff* I’m here. Ready. Set. *realizes you’ve already gone.* Goes.

@daeus

Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

*Doesn’t wait to be told* Ready. Set. Go!

Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago

Oooooh *excited whisper* cookie cookie cookie… I love da cookie…

@bluejay

Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago

What they said @writefury. 🙂

And I love this— it’s a classic example of everything I cannot do. It’s simple but powerful, cute but touching, and above all lean and to the point. Excellent work!

BlueJay started the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 10 years, 5 months ago

I don’t know if there are any of stop motions out there who are writers too, but even if you’re not, you’ll probably still enjoy this movie. This is one that I made last year for a competition. It is based on the series of books “The Kingdom Series” by Chuck Black. I hope you enjoy it. 😀

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnaGaEBI9K0

Feel free to…[Read more]

BlueJay started the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 10 years, 5 months ago

I don’t know if there are any of stop motions out there who are writers too, but even if you’re not, you’ll probably still enjoy this movie. This is one that I made last year for a competition. It is based and the series of books The Kingdom Series by Chuck Black. I hope you enjoy it. 😀

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnaGaEBI9K0

BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

@anna-brie Ok. I’ll be busy till 10 too. 😀 And I’ll be writing at 10:30 with @daeus if you want to join us for the half hour. (And we can make it an hour if you want to continue) 🙂

Anna Brie replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

@Bluejay I’ll be home all day, though I’ll be busy until about 10:00 (I’ve used Charlotte in my profile picure elsewhere in the past.)

Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Writing Advice in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

@gretald — Absolutely!

@zoe-wingfeather — I think that’s great advice! I use people that I meet and family/friends all the time, especially when you’re getting started. Sometimes, too, I find it helpful not to start with appearance. Sometimes a line of dialogue will pop up in my head and then I create the character around that line or few…[Read more]

Daeus replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago

@writefury I would change a couple little things, but not much. The best thing about this poem is that it really personalizes the boat. *adds boat as friend on Facebook* Oh, and also the rhyme (I love rhyme).

Here are the little tweaks I would make:

And wood deck a sheen

Sounds strange. Decks are not sheen, they have a sheen.

As darker clouds…

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BlueJay replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago

O wow! @writefury That is really good. I really do like it. I’m not very good at poetry, but I would fix or change anything. *Other people might think differently. 😛 *

Rosey Mucklestone started the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago

Just me writing a poem.
A poem that… surprisingly fits my avatar. 😛
Anyway. Thoughts appreciated!

New little sailboat

Painted and clean

With sails so white

And wood deck a sheen

It sits by the dock

Prepared to explore

Waves lap and call

For departure from shore

Brave little sailboat

Sets out at last

Taming the waves

Putting…[Read more]

BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago

I’ll join you @writefury and @hannah-olsen I read way too fast. 🙂

BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago

I’ll join you @writefury and @hannah-olsen I read why to fast. 🙂

BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago

I’ll join you @writefruy and @hannah-olsen I read why to fast. 🙂

Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

Love the lollypop, @daeus. XD

Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago

Welcome, @hannah-olsen!
Awesome to have you!
*gasp* you’ve been to New Zealand?! luckyyyyy… 😛
And finishing books in record time? *highfives* Me too! We can be reading cheetahs together. 😀

BlueJay replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago

Haha @daeus. 😛

Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago

@hannah-olsen
Welcome Hannah!!! *throws sparkly confetti* So glad to have you on the forum!
Idaho is so beautiful! (That’s were I was born) Enjoy it for me!
Yay an Elizabeth Gaskell fan! I’ve seen Wives and Daughters and have yet to read the book!

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