Faith Kindred

Oh, this is in the 1400s? 😛 I was going to guess western.

@rolena-hatfield I think this is looking good. I did pick out a good amount of things that could use improvement and I couldn’t really get to all of them, but it’s an engaging story for sure and you did an impressive job. The one thing that needed help throughout was that you got a lot of your verb tenses mixed up and occasionally you had problems…[Read more]

@bluejay haha, you’re to sweet. 😉

@jess Ooo good point. *goes to switch things around*

@sarah-h Great guesses for the little bit given! It actually does take place in England about 1498. Though it’s not strictly historical fiction cause I don’t know everything about that time period. Though I realized after I posted it that there’s a couple…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield It’s awesome. More, more, more. Please. No wait. *commands* more! *sounds to harsh* *begs again* please. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

@Daeus thanks. 😀 *takes half of what remains*

Here are my “long ago” two truths and a lie answers.

#1 I had a black eye an inch thick from whacking my head on my sister’s head. TRUE
#2 I have had to have an operation my my little toe because of a weird toe nail. TRUE
#3 I have a scar on my head because I got hit with a sword that wasn’t blunt. FALSE

I actually cut my head on the oven doo…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper *laughs**winces* That sounds painfully familiar. 😛

Hey, that’s great Kate. And miss dragon, no editing’s bad if it’s editing that needs to be done. I fixed some points of editing on two of my chapters.

@Daeus @Dragon-Snapper I’m at a good stopping place, so I’m stopping a bit early. I got 1,106 words— yay! 😀

Ha.

Sure. How high do I need to count?

@Daeus count me in.

Hey @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @anyone, I’m on till nine.

Hey @kate-flournoy @dragon-shapper @anyone, I’m on till nine.

@christi-eaton Heh, you can say that again. I don’t really think I could listen to them long term, but they’re really neat.

For those who guessed my last one, #3 was a lie; I’ve never got lost in mountains. I’ve never even seen real mountains. 🙁

I’ll do another one…

#1: I got my purple belt in karate this year.
#2: We have a couple hundred mice living in our barn.
#3: I once had a cat named Edmund.

Welcome, @r-e-p …about a week late. *winces* I’m not on here as much as I used to be. And yes! I am not longer the oldest person on here. 😉 I’m 22…I think there are two or three older writers on the forum, but not many. 😀

Welcome, @r-e-p…about a week late. *winces* I’m not on here as much as I used to be. And yes! I am not longer the oldest person on here. 😉 I’m 22…I think there are two or three older writers on the forum, but not many. 😀