Faith Q.

@writerlexi1216

No need to apologize (I’m not always the best with technology either:)

@abigail-m Oo, Nice! I like how you set up the MC and the setting right off the bat! Thanks, by the way!

@kathleenramm Thank you! Your comments make me very happy (❁´◡`❁)

@seekjustice Thank you! That’s exactly what I wanted to set up with the prologue. I love yours as well! I really want to know what’s going to happen!

@seekjustice

Thank you! Your first sentences are awesome too! It painted such vivid images and made me wonder more about who this character is:)

@writerlexi1216 I AM SO GLAD YOU DECIDED TO SHARE IT, GIRL!!!!!!!! I am proud that you felt brave enough to do that!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thank you for sharing it with us!!!

@mkfairygirl @abigail-m @e-k-seaver @wyn-rose Thanks for letting me know, guys!!! I am so appreciative of your kind words!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

@writerlexi1216

Hmm, I tried to open the file, but it says I don’t have access. You may have to open the file to sharing, but no worries about rushing (okay, the reader in me is saying rush:)
But seriously, no need to rush, whenever you can is awesome:D

Sorry @devastate-lasting mispelt your name in my tag!

@kathleenramm

I love this topic already! @devestate-lasting @abigail-m yours sound amazing! I love the line “She couldn’t remember the last time she saw daylight” because its so eerie and confusing and immediately makes me think “What the heck?” but also makes me think of the arctic/antarctic (which I think is what you’re going for) so it grounds…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

THIS IS SO AWESOME! (whoops, I was shouting wasn’t I?) Ah, I’m just so excited that you’re sharing your first chapter! 😀
I am a slow reader, but I’m gonna start on it right away!
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀

@writerlexi1216 Aaaaa, yesss! Writer buddies forever and ever and ever ever ever! 😊

@gracie-j XD what made you think that? Just curious, lol.
And also, thank you! With all of these kind words, I’m feeling more secure in this.

@devastate-lasting @abigail-m

Thanks y’all!! I just needed some encouragement (:

I haven’t finished the draft yet, but yea I think quite a few ppl edit the individual books, but I also know of ppl who don’t but who write out the whole series (at least he first drafts) before editing and stuff.

@kathleenramm

Thank you:)

@godlyfantasy12

Currently, I haven’t been writing a lot of fantasy since my current WIP is more of an adventure that I’ve been careful to keep fantasy out of for plot reasons.
But I do love writing it, especially the worldbuilding:)

But DO NOT get discouraged by first drafts. I recently looked through a few first drafts of an author whose…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

I love that first line! It’s so whimsical and eerie; it’s fantastic:)

@kathleenramm

Oh my goodness, I love your first line, it immediately made me wonder about the character:)

Here are the first three sentences from the prologue in The Snow Warrior. The prologue picks up a few days after she’d been abandoned. She didn’t have her Title or sword then either, so it’s one of the few ‘before’ scenes in the story.

The…[Read more]

The bells clanged at the railroad crossing, lights flashing as the train brushed by, the wind scattering flower petals everywhere.

“Ah…”

He stood there, watching. Watching, waiting…

@kathleenramm Oo, I love that! That sounds really interesting, I’d love to read your story someday!

Ahem. Anyways, the above was from my current novella…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 I write the complete opposite of high fantasy, so I can’t really give you any pointers on it…but since you’ve just finished your first draft, and it’s your work, I’d say go for it, girl! And even if it doesn’t work out, you can always write another series if you want to!

(Wait, you guys edit after finishing each book? I wait til…[Read more]