Faith

@savannah_grace2009

I’m currently on chapter 9, and so far I think the pacing is good. I’ll get some more thoughts to you later.

Also, question. Are you planning on making Livia a main character in this draft?

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.

@whalekeeper I’ll be too busy to write the rest of this week, but thanks! Visiting my brother’s family tomorrow and Saturday. But I have six more years left to join. :]

@elishavet-pidyon You’re not alone. I had to look up what grade 10 yr olds are in for Brea, and I wasn’t homeschooled XD

@whalekeeper

Brea (the library)

“People say that he and I look a lot alike, but I don’t see it because he’s a boy and also old.” Brea did a little hair toss, letting her black curls bounce against her shoulder. Then she fu…[Read more]

It’s sad I couldn’t join this time. Does anyone know when the next one is? Also, is it only for a certain age group?

@everyone
How’s the crazy writing going?

Don’t know if I’ve said this before, but the way Lyens name everything is hilarious XD

@linus-smallprint Reading it right now! Sorry, I’ve gotten behind. I’ll let you know my thoughts once I’m done :]

Thanks guys.

@whalekeeper Do you want Hugo to interact here? Don’t want to annoy you with tags if not @elishavet-pidyon

Brea

“Fifth,” she said. “My brother Lois is a senior. Do you know him?”

Also please pray that the rest of my family will stay healthy, because whatever he has seems pretty bad.

Hey guys, please pray for my little brother, he’s sick rn and has an awful cough and is really miserable right now.

@rae

I read the beginning of your story (sorry it took me a while to get to it) and I think it’s interesting. If you post the rest when you’re finished, please tag me!

@whalekeeper

Yes, it’s serious, Hannah. That’s a Sufjan Stevens song. Marcel deserves better. 🥺

lovely music though. I very much enjoyed listening to it. :]

@whalekeeper

I do not like the implications of that song title, Hannah.

Oh my dad just asked me to help with dinner perfect timing 😅

@whalekeeper

No, I don’t think im sad. My family’s just a bit stressful.

@koshka

That’s so awesome. I want one. You can make smores and chicken nuggets and pizza and I just realized I’ve only eaten one meal today lol