Evelyn collins

@evelyn-collins heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?

also WE’VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can’t imagine how it’s gonna end, but I’m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.

@evelyn-collins Really?

@evelyn-collins oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol

@evelyn-collins it’s in the same genes that control the gray hair and sniper eyes XD

seriously though, I do a lot of things like my dad, and my mom says it really is in our blood since he and I have the same blood type

@evelyn-collins was just reading the latest bit of your story!

tbh I love how you wrote Leo being annoyed at the bird flying outside her window lol

@evelyn-collins ooh, this is gettin’ good!

one little edit though–Emerie introduced herself twice??? maybe rework that scene so she doesn’t say her full name until Leo asks for it.

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well, I had some ideas if you flip back a page or two

Want me to repost them or are you ok with looking for them?

@evelyn-collins yeahh that makes a lot of sense!

@evelyn-collins ooh, another idea I had….

Maybe this last flashback was a dream? And when she’s dreaming about it, something happens that didn’t happen when she actually did it. She wakes up and wonders why her brain went to that when it clearly didn’t happen in her memories, then realized it was a dream. That sets up her being on the Imperial ship.

@evelyn-collins all righty!

Ideas (You can take or leave any of them):

• Leo awakes imprisoned on a starship in hyperspace, Crosshair guarding her. She is going to confront him, but he’s called away before she can really get anything out of him, or some other stormtroopers take her away or something. They take her on an Imperial shuttle to…

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@evelyn-collins I don’t think so. I was just asking what you needed help with. Sorry about being so blunt lol

@evelyn-collins what do you need help with?

oh also I probably can’t post links here right now (they’re affected in the same way as pictures probably) but I found this hilarious short video of the actor for the clones messing around with with Hunter, Wrecker and Crosshair action figures and doing all their voices. It was so funny.

@evelyn-collins you bet! All four!!

It was kinda simultaneously sad and funny, when Omega reunited with Hunter and Wrecker and they’re all hugging her, then Crosshair comes and they’re just like “You’re very sus…..” and just stare at him for the remaining 30 seconds of the episode.

I was like “What? No hug for him? Not even from you,…[Read more]

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Wow!

Just read what you recently wrote.

I’m assuming they’re taking her to the Tantiss facility or something? (That’s the name of the base btw, not the planet. I believe the planet itself is called Weyland?)

She’ll probably come into contact with her father a lot now….Not that she’ll like it.

OR, maybe Crosshair gets sent to…[Read more]

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@evelyn-collins weird. Sometimes pictures glitch though. This must be one of those days…..

Hey, if you can tell me exactly what you’re stuck on, I might be able to help, although I’ll have to get back to you on it in a day or two because I have to get off in a sec.

@evelyn-collins nope, still glitched, try another way of putting it into the window

hit the insert/edit image and then get it from your computer or phone’s files?

you’re welcome for the idea! I love having a fellow Star Wars fanfic writer to talk to lol. I can’t wait to see it if you end up writing it!

@evelyn-collins ooh, one thing you could do is write a short prequel from Crosshair’s POV, starting off much the same way that episode starts off, but instead of Rampart sending him off with Cody, he’s like “You’re coming with me to investigate this planet.”

It could also give a little detail as to why Cross is tracking Leo, but makes no effort…[Read more]

@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense

so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….

So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]