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Active 7 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 8 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper First of all, nice example. 🙂
I don’t think that it’s too dismal by itself. Even a lot of that can be good. It creates tension, you know.
It just takes a little bit of hope to keep the reader on the right track. Simple things too. Depression works because it pretends to be immense. Little, pleasurable, “childish” (quote on…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper We’ll I think you’re the first to ever reveal their name after hiding it for a long time. It’s kinda funny too because Danielle has a really soft feel to it which…doesn’t exactly make me think of a dragon. lol. Don’t burn me with a ball of flame, please! I like the name. It starts with a Da, after all. What more could you ask for?
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper *drops jaw* Did you just reveal your…actual name?
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Daeus replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 I’m feeling slightly sentimental like you’re leaving, but you’re celebrating the fact that you’re not leaving. I find that utterly fascinating. Write that down somewhere. Happiness can be sad.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow… has it really almost been a year? 😛 Time flies.
Hey, I happily take the credit for all those terrible (awesome) things if it means I helped you grow even the tiniest bit. Thank you. I’m glad. Keep going. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper If the problem is just that your story seems too dismal, make sure there’s always an element of hope mixed in with the chaos and strive to focus on your characters’ yearnings/ambitions that drive them forward. If you’ve got that all down, I bout your story could be too dismal. Problems tend to intensify stories. It’s only stories…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine I’ll play it by ear. I like writing poetry, but I might be swamped this week.
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Daeus replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 6 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Ha! That made my day.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel I love it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@Dekreel sweet. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@ashlyvye Oh, there were others when I joined. I showed up just in time to crash their party, and now they’ve made me king. How cool is that?
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Daeus replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@ashlyvye Haha! Well, I’ve been on the forum since the day it started so they just slowly accumulated over time. Plus, I used to be super active on here. (@that_writer_girl_99)
I’ve read the Mistborn trilogy and The Way of Kings. I’m not really sure which one I like better.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hiya KeePers!! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@ashlyvye I don’t know how I managed to miss you until now, but welcome! Just so you know, there are a handful of Brandon Sanderson fans on here, myself included. 😉
You should definitely read The Lord Of The Rings. I admit, parts of it can be a slow read, but it gives you a deeper look at the characters. Also, I believe the meaning behind the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Informal Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Thanks everyone!
You may be wondering what my goal was with this. I had a theory that most writers like you want to make an impact (you seem to agree), but that at the same time they fear being a professional author will be too hard for them and so they don’t treat themselves completely seriously. I didn’t phrase the question for that one…[Read more]
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