@evangelinatroy_rose
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Wow! I really did think it was terrible— just awful. I guess I’m not an objective judge. 😛 Thanks so much, Daeus— for everything.
Oh yes, the contradiction about the king deserting and all that… 😛 Actually the poem went through a backstory change in the middle of writing it, and I hadn’t yet got around to fixing it. 😛
And you know,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Egh, forgot the tag thingy.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Hmmmmmm, the dictionary says this.
sneak |snēk|
verb (past sneaked or informal snuck)I’d consider myself a fairly informal person over all.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Dear Imaginary Friend—
You asked for it.
Son of a Warrior
Love is sacrifice. Only with the gift of everything it is will it ever come into the fullness of everything it was meant to be.
The weary warrior in the night, riding true and fast and far,
with love of land and love of king to guide him, and a star,
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Daeus replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy
I’ll be ever so helpful here. If you changed cadence between the first verse and the third verse, you probably did it in the second verse.*cough cough* Yes, let’s see. Down to business…
Post the thing. Yep, I kinda need it.
I deal well with ideas, but I do better when I have examples to go along.
Signed,
An imaginary friend
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
‘Kay, I’ve got a little problem here. As you know if you clicked on the topic. And if you didn’t, you aren’t even here… *gasp* I’m talking to someone who’s not even here!
Anyway.
I have this really long, rough poem that I started writing like… a year ago? It was the first real poem I ever tried… anyway, I’ve been wanting to finish it,…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Hi, Hannah! I love to write fantasy, too! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Welcome to the forum @Hannah-Krynicki! Always glad to have a newbie on here. 🙂 The problem with newbies is, they don’t stay that way. 😉 😛
What kind of fantasy do you like to write? More of a historical style (like Tolkien) or incredibly fantastic fantasy? Like— really weird, awesome stuff that I don’t have a term for without going into a…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Hmm, somehow a y snuck in there. You can ignore it. I’ll need to improve my internet security.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
How dee ya do?
As I like to say, welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
It sound’s like you’ve already had some good fun writing truck loads of exciting story stuff. How’s that going?
By the way, I’m the least experienced and most vocal writer here, which is to say that if you’re running short on time you can just read everybody…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
How about “Truth walks in the meadow”
I might be the only one who will ever like that though.
Series titles are part of your meta-data for Amazon so you might want to begin your quest for a good title by looking for good keywords and phrases that you could use. I mean, let’s be honest, which is better? A great series title that sells you more…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hm… maybe ‘Seekers of Truth’… assuming there are people in the story who are actually seeking to find the answers.
Is there an overall theme for the series? Is it God’s existence, God’s grace, God’s love, God’s mercy, man’s relationship with God? I find it’s usually much easier to think of a title when I know the theme and am pulling the…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Kindle Publishing in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@hope I’m a little unsure what you were asking, but I’ll try to answer this.
I think you were asking how to publish outside of Amazon. I’m not positive, but I imagine you should be able to upload directly to all of the other retailers. I know at least for some you can (ibooks is one). Some people like to upload their book to this one company (I…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Here’s a quick idea—don’t know if it has any merit, but it struck me all of a sudden.
Legends of Light.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Series Title in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hm… I’ll have to think on that one. 😛 I’ll let you know if I come up with anything especially brilliant. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Good Bet (Short Story) in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 8 months ago
Hey, @writefury! Sorry, I didn’t notice you’d posted or I would have gotten back to you sooner. 😛
I love this story— everything about it. The casually western feel, the quiet vividness of the MC… and the emotional hook with Owen Morgan. All the characters were well done, the dialogue was fantastic, and the last line was perfect. Tied it all…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Oh— and another new favorite.
Rose of Prophecy, by @Hope Schmidt. 😀
Seriously. Which says a lot for her, because when someone reads a book specifically to pick holes in it (I beta read it for her) they generally can’t get over the mistakes. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I just finished a book I’d never heard of in my life before— my grandma lent it to me. It’s called ‘Beyond Sing the Woods’, and is by Trygve Gulbranssen. TRIG-VEE GULL-bran-sen.
That. Book. Was. Fantastic.
It’s a classic, and so can be a little slow and meandering at times, but it has got to make at least the top ten favorite books for me.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Best Book Ever in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
And then there are the really sad stories. King Saul. King Solomon. King David, even, though his started out so well. All of their stories did, in fact. From redemption to rejection.
But thankfully not all the stories are like that. My favorite New Testament hero is Paul— his story is absolutely mindblowing. And Peter— a story of fear and…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Best Book Ever in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
And then there are the really sad stories. King Saul. King Solomon. King David, even, though his started out so well. All of their stories did, in fact. From redemption to rejection.
But thankfully not all the stories are like that. My favorite New Testament hero is Paul— his story is absolutely mindblowing. And Peter— a story of fear and…[Read more]
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