Karina Sanchez

@ClaireC with pleasure. 🙂

@Claire-C with pleasure. 🙂

Anne!!!! You came to KP!!! Oh my goodness why did you have to do it while I was on vacation I haven’t properly welcomed you and this is terrible oh dear!!
So first of all— WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN, @ANNE-OF-LOTHLORIEN!!

Yes. So now that that’s out of the way… I really like your poem. I agree with the comments about the rhythm— it does seem to…[Read more]

Ooh, such a lovely topic! @Mark-Kamibaya thanks for starting it. I missed it initially because I’m on vacation and wifi is spotty, but you may rest assured I have not abandoned the forum. 😉
As for my favorite structure/arc… well, it really depends. I don’t think I have an absolute favorite. The two I primarily use are Hero’s Journey and…[Read more]

dragon-snapper *salutes*

@bluejay *waves farewell back* See ya around.

@bluejay, well you’re probably done by now, but I’m gonna do some beta reading till nine anyways.

@mark-kamibaya

I’ve only really studied K.M’s system actually. I like it because it’s fairly simple (once you get to understand it), the plot points make it easy to lay out the pacing for a novel, it is easily tweaked to fit any of the three character arcs, it corresponds directly to the character arc itself, and I’ve been able to observe it in…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien I do like it, though I think it could use some polishing. For one thing, some of the lines sound too every-day-speechy (e.g. “they don’t fear me”). One of the most important things in poetry is to say things in a way people don’t expect, especially by using metaphors.

One thing that really stuck out to me is that I’d like the…[Read more]

@bluejay
Aww, man. I so wish I could, but I can’t right now. I have to go to bed early to get up early tomorrow, and I’m getting over being sick. 🙁 Hope you find some company, though! 🙂 Can I… *glances at chocolate*…y’know…have some…*inches toward chocolate*…chocolate? Even though I’m not writing with you? You’re so nice. *grabs…[Read more]

@bluejay Oh, it sounded like you had chosen beauty and the beast. Are there going to be others too? Unfortunately, I can’t be much help even though I do really like chocolate. I’m simply not much of a fairy tale person.

@bluejay Ooo, I like the story idea! And like @christi-eaton said, it does remind me a bit of Inkheart. 🙂 You will let me read it when you’re finished, won’t you? 😉

@bluejay Ooo, I like the story idea! And like @christi-eaton says, it does remind me a bit of Inkheart. 🙂 You will let me read it when you’re finished, won’t you? 😉

Ooh, wifi on vacation! Yessss…

*ahem* You’re quite welcome, @Sarah-H. 😀 As I see it, the only purpose of debate is to discuss and discover truth, and anything besides firm respect and consideration is, at the very least, completely unnecessary. I do my best to live by that rule.
And good for your brother he’s willing to stand up and defend…[Read more]

Hi @anne-of-lothlorien,

Welcome to the most dangerous society yet. Can you tell us about your WIP?

Btw, I like Indiana too. It’s pretty similar to Ohio.

Hi @gideon-sowdon,

I guess I’m late, but I’m glad you’re here.

@sarah-h Oooh, taking the heat is he? I’m glad I wasn’t too rough. I almost wondered if I was.

@Jess Awesome! So glad they liked it. 🙂

@gideon-sowdon
Well, I’m late to the party as usual. BUT hello and welcome to Kingdom Pen, the bestistest place on the internet (I can’t believe I’m the first to welcome you properly)! 🙂
Edit: Oh wait, @bluejay already did. 😛