Karina Sanchez

@Anne-of-Lothlorien I’m seventeen and my birthday is March 24. 😀

@anne-of-lothlorien Actually, it never even crossed my mind that she learned it way too fast. Maybe it would have peeved me if I had thought of it, but since I didn’t, I guess I’ll just imagine I’m still innocent and remain content.

Aha! I was wondering when you’d show up. (moderators notice stalkers). Glad you finally poked your head above water. Drowning certainly isn’t recommended.

There’s lots of stuff to do on the forum. For instance…
If you make a big writing discovery, share it so we can all know about it too
Brainstorm with others about your story…[Read more]

Did someone say “ACTING?” I’m here. Hi. *waves* *grins*
I LOVE ACTING SO MUCH! It’s the best thing since writing. 😉
I’m currently in “The Best Christmas Pageant Ever” (have you read the book? It’s amazing!), and it’s been so much fun! I do community theater. 🙂 Some of my favorite plays I’ve been in are Anne of Green Gables, A Christmas…[Read more]

@Alia
Very nice. I like it.
One quick thing…

If God keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world,
What right does the world have to say “No consequence”

The last line doesn’t really flow well, so maybe write something like, “How can the world say ‘No consequence,'” instead. I don’t know; it’s your poem. 😉
I really like it, though. The rep…[Read more]

@anne-swiftblade YESSSSS!!! Cake and ice cream! *runs over* *steals cake* *runs off*

@anne-swiftblade YASSSSS!!! Cake and ice cream! *runs over* *steals cake* *runs off*

@anne-of-lothlorien
I’m sixteen, and my birthday is August 24. 🙂

@anne-of-lothlorien I’ll fill in for you.

@hope
@gretald
@kate-flournoy
@anne-swiftblade

@bluejay
OK. Sorry…I haven’t had time to reply yet. But poetry experimentation is so much fun, so I couldn’t miss out on this topic. 😉
Anyway, sonnets are a lot of fun but pretty hard because of the meter (I’ve only written an “almost sonnet” before). There are two types of sonnets, each containing 14 lines: the English (or Shakespearean…[Read more]

Will do.

@overcomer
No problem! Glad I could help. 🙂

I don’t want to make it too uniform because I want it to meander like the inner thoughts it’s supposed to reflect.

Oh, I see. That’s a really good idea. 😉 Hard to strike that balance, though, I’d imagine. 🙂

@anne-swiftblade, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Sweet Sixteen, too! Hope your day is awesome! 😀

Hope you like chocolate cake! 😉

@anne-swiftblade, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Sweet Sixteen, too! Hope your day is awesome! 😀

@ClaireC
I love this topic idea!

@Sarah-h
I’ll definitely pray. Learning languages is hard, especially when you’re trying to learn them quickly. Speaking and listening to native speakers is the hardest part, but with God, anything is possible. 😉

@Claire-C
I love this topic idea!

@Sarah-h
I’ll definitely pray. Learning languages is hard, especially when you’re trying to learn them quickly. Speaking and listening to native speakers is the hardest part, but with God, anything is possible. 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien
Again, I’m late…but WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN!!! I recognize you from Hope’s blog (I’m gretald on there). 😉
Yesssss! I love your book choices! Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, and The Mysterious Benedict Society are some of my favorites. 🙂

@bluejay Seems like you did a pretty good job with the huge limitations of trying to fit all those words in there. One thing to note is that the lines:
“His words must be erroneously
They definitely weren’t symmetrically”
are not grammatically correct because of their -ly endings.

As far as improvement, because of your limitations, I think your b…[Read more]