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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
Here’s Sara’s (the main character, Cole’s twin sister.)

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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I like it! A little Ender’s Game, a little something else. It’s giving dystopian. 💁♀️ I’m usually not sure how to react when people explain backstories since it’s out of context, but it sounds like pretty solid trauma, especially for a whole group of protagonists.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@anybody
I created a mock cover my Christmas short story! I’m not 100% in love with the title, so it might change. Once I have some alpha readers give me their feedback, I’mma share it on here for y’all to read! But before then, here’s the cover to intrigue you. 😋

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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
@whalekeeper Thank you!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
@grcr @esther-c @ellette-giselle
Thanks so much!! 🤩 I think Everett’s is my favorite. I really like the colors and pictures in his lol.
@ellette
Okay, so for the book I’m working on right now, he’s sort of indecisive. Sara *slight spoilers* becomes a Christian and starts attending the underground church meetings with Everett and Jess, but Cole…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Alpha need a lot of perspective reorientation. Actually I have a close friend who once reacted to a puppy in a very similar way, haha 😝 He even used the word scrawny.
Lol
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whaley replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
Immaculate vibes. 👌
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a gramm…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
That’s pretty much how I picture Baron too. Powerful, but not the best teammate, at least for now.
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Whichever is worst, lol.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I’m glad you like him. I’ve tried hard to make him an interesting charrie.
Yeah, I get that. It makes sense. Baron was a solo, sometimes duo for the Bloodsilver, so large teams aren’t his usual thing.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
I love themmm!! 😍
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae
Alpha need a lot of perspective reorientation. Actually I have a close friend who once reacted to a puppy in a very similar way, haha 😝 He even used the word scrawny.
@ellette-giselle*Sticks out my tongue at you* What is your most traumatized backstory then?
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle snowball x10
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Ruth replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I’m hit!
PUPPY SCENE TIME!!!!!!! I’ll continue it later
108 wordsAlpha eyed Emmie suspiciously as she came towards him holding a basket, a smile on her face. “Surprise!” She showed him the contents of the basket, where two little puppies lay sleeping together. “Aren’t they adorable? They’re such cute little things!” she exclaimed,…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
And Cole Bauer, Sara’s twin brother. I don’t have a lot of quotes for him yet. If anyone has tips on finding some, I’d appreciate it.

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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
Jess McCullough, another member of the underground church and one of Sara and Everett’s friends.

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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle @@liberty @esther-c @elishavet-elroi @anyone-interested 🤗
I made moodboards for the other leading characters in The Color of Hope. I’m also working on doing another one for Sara 🤪 We’ll see if they work . . .
Everett Andersen, one of Sara’s friends. He is a Christian and the boy who invites her to the church meetings.

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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Okay, now it’s a challenge. Post what you wrote, and I can almost certainly top it.
Honestly, even writing down the bare facts of the backstory might be too graphic for people. It’s necessary because the end of the story is a reversal of the beginning, kind of like that flash fiction I posted a couple pages back.
I l…[Read more]
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Okay, thank you so much!! I am so sorry I completely forgot about it after KDWC shut down 🤦. I will try to check it out later today!
No worries at all! I only added the draft into the doc today, so you aren’t really forgetting about anything. 😝