Euodia

@raxforge 🌬️ ⚪️ @keilah-h 🌬️ ⚪️

Yep, I celebrate Christmas!

I celebrate it with a little different intention than many Christians do. Lots of people believe it is morally right to celebrate it as only Christ’s birthday, and we should have focus and do nothing else; as a child I was confused about this because it doesn’t mention this holiday anywhere in the Bible.

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@ellette-giselle

I just did! They look great! Nice to see the pictures of what they look like. Joseph’s was a little blurry… but… I think I saw a picture of him handcuffed against a wall… 😳

@theducktator

Sounds good. Third person makes it a lot easier to keep track.

Maybe they’ll just have less important roles. Or maybe they’ll die.

Lol… 😳

getting sidetracked by a good book, I have returned.

Ooh! What book did this happen to be? 🤪

@ellette-giselle

Good section!!!

Again, you’re summing up lots of time here, especially at the end. I would maybe like to be shown instead of told some of that, but it’s okay if you just really need to get to the next part.

Joseph felt that for once they were safe.

Then, something happened that changed everything.

Oh no… 😥

Sorry, 10 snowballs.

Would anyone be offended if I hypothetically threw 9 snowballs at them?

Hypothetically, this is all in theory of course, why would you think I would do that haha.

👀

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)

275 words

“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.

Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”

N…

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@linus-smallprint What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Also the part about the writer changing them didn’t make sense to me. Why not just not write…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ahhhh, gotcha.

Sure!

@the_lost-journal

So, whenever I’m overwhelmed, whether by emotions or circumstances, or just whatever, I have to remind myself that God is there and He cares and wants me to turn to Him for help. I understand it’s not easy for everyone to talk to a God that they can’t physically see or hear, but He’s there, Kefa. He wants you to come to Him wit…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aww!! 🥰

So, one question—why would Amelia inherit part of her uncle’s inn? Wouldn’t that usually go to her brothers?

Also, I like that we’re getting more conversations between Joseph and Amelia. However, I feel like they’re all based on future situations—mostly just “what if this happens?” Except for this one:
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Hey.

Just wanted to pop in to let you know I’m still praying for you Kefa.

May God be with you.

now I need to writer something for Nahim…

@ellette-giselle

She was being chased through the meadow by a teen girl. Sorry if that wasn’t clear.

@loopylin @ellette-giselle

Baron scene!

Baron watched a little girl run across a meadow, flowers woven into her long silver hair. She was laughing in childish joy as a teen girl chased after her through the meadow grass. As he watched, a breeze welled around him, playing in his hair. He was like her Guardian Angel, her hero, who watched from afar…

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I’m kinda in between Whaley and Ellette on this. They both have good points I agree with.

It’s your call, Linus. Your story is the one on the line.

@whalekeeper I get that and to some extent agree. It’s just the inclusion of a detailed description of the spells kinda broke immersion for me a little. It didn’t seem THAT necessary.

@loopylin

lol, that is the best reason I think I’ve ever heard!

@ellette-giselle

That is such an un-cool reason to hit someone.

No! it’s great, I love it!

I’m so proud of my tag!

I know what I want!!!! I want more Baron.

Or Nahim.

Okay…I guess I can do that

Also people like Ellette can have their limits, I’m not trying to shame that. 😅