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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@linus-smallprint ok, yeah that sounds about right!
I didn’t think of that, but you’re probably right. I kind of like whimsical, just as long as it doesn’t get cheesy.
Yeah me too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle I like it!!
I do think it was kinda hard to figure out who the POV character is. Maybe make that a little more clear.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper no offense to HP fans or any series really. Just had to use something that I’ve seen split families and friendships, and I think that’s horrible.
Personally, I take the stance of “You can like whatever the Saxton Hale you like, as long as it’s not controlling you and it’s not encouraging you to try any stuff (magic, murder, substance…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@theducktator Well, other than that.
I think that falls less in the realm of “deadly sin” and more “proving yourself as an annoying miscreant.”
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Ooooohhh okay, well as long as it’s just satire 😂
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Yeah, it’s funny and I enjoy watching fire, but the actual meaning of the video is too hateful for me. Disney is pretty selfish and pandering, I agree with him. But this guy seems like he has a lot of emotions pent up inside him, and forgot how to care about other humans. I can easily picture him trying to convince children that Frozen i…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
I’m reading about charries and Vikings!
Lol
YES! 100%
Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.
All I can say without giving anything away is…Leon, you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle very helpful backstory.
I was a little concerned, but now at least it’s funny.
Still a little traumatizing for new Christians and such if you don’t know the context though lol
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hybridlore posted an update 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Happy November 1–National Authors Day!! @kyronthearcanin @ellette-giselle @freedomwriter76 @livingwoodchronicles @anyone-with-a-published-book
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Many who recalled that night would think to themselves that the sky was weeping.
If so, many wept with it.
Love this!
I’m interested to read more, even though I don’t really know much about it since I haven’t read most of the first book. I might have read an chapter or two. 😅
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Okay.
That was somethin’ else.
I’m not sure what to think of this. On the one hand, I kinda appreciate his zeal. On the other hand, I feel like going full on Pyro and making a show of burning Disney characters might be funny in a dark kinda way, but it’s also likely to alienate non-Christians cause then they’re…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Sure, your character can meet up with mine if ye want.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Yep, that works. It’s just Marcel, Sara and Fel, moseying along.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
I’m reading about charries and Vikings!
Lol I was up late, so I got up at eight. And I still have road lag from my trip to D.C. Oh, well.
Yours can meet up with ours, but I feel like the larger the group gets, the harder it will be to pace the conversation.
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RAE's profile was updated 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
That’s what I want to know 😥 I have a school book open right now and I’m going back and forth to keep up.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
I think Baron needs French Toast…it would certainly improve his mood XD
Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.
Frustrating charrie.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
BTW anyone is free to meet up with Klethen, I think my RP for him in on page 6 or something (even though I only wrote it a couple hours ago XD)
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Wow. How do you guys RP so much with school???
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Happy National Author’s Day to you!!!!!
Yippy! We get our own holiday and we didn’t even have to go to war to earn it.
Take that back. We totally went to war. A war with words and the pen, which is mightery then the sword.
‘Tis mightier indeed. And thanks 😅
Ahem @freed_and_redeemed 🤣
Happy Author’s Day to you as well!!! 💜✨