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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle not a ramble! At least you’re rambling about your writing and not about something random…..as I do quite commonly…..
eheheheheh you remember THOSE conversations which I’m NOT gonna bring up on this forum after this lolllllAnd I think 13 is fine tbh. Your books are actually not that bad in terms of violence so far.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I’m also pretty…
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Barnes
“Might as well be an exoskeletal crisis,” Barnes said. “Soul-searching is illegal in nineteen counties. You have always been you, Angelo, have a cup of tea.”
Hugo looked back and forth between Reid and Tenz. His eyes became the slightest bit shiny, expression hidden by his scarf. “I can’t go to anyone for help, Tenz. They…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle 17, almost 18. Remember how I was making a big deal about Sabina getting married that young because I could barely imagine getting married at my age? lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!
also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Oops, I forgot to call Baron Brutus in the rp. Sorry.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Klethen — Elderstrand (w/ Ilahna and Everett)
Klethen was about to reply when he was kicked to the ground. Despite being caught off guard, he was able to turn his fall into an awkward sideways roll and landed only slightly out of breath.
The stranger who had attacked him demanded to know where they were and pointed a sword a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Totally gotcha. Sometimes it’s just good to get all your thoughts on a scene down, even if they don’t all end up in the final draft.
Sure. Hopefully you got what I meant, since this is kind of a controversial topic in Christian writing circles. In the end, it’s really up to the author who knows what’s best for their story h…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle
(No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)Yeah. Funny you mention growing faster than a kitten when I have one trying to eat my shirt right now (She literally has the hem in her mouth XD)
“You’re elbows are sharper then normal elbows should be.”
Lol!
@grcr @raxforge (the one who needs to rp) @ellette-giselle
Baron (Brut…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
How did you know GRCR was RPing?
I used my superpower that allows me to see what KPers are doing.
jkjk
Actually, it was simple deduction. I knew from the community tab that she was still signed in to KP, and according to the Recent Topics tab, she wasn’t posting anything in other forums so I assumed she was simply typing a long…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Awww! Really sweet scene. So… could I get some more backstory here? 😅 Aaron died because he was a Christian and didn’t give into the government, but the reason everyone else is still alive is because the gov doesn’t know they’re believers? And if Noah was tortured once for his faith, how did he escape?
I know this kind of thin…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I have written an rp but I think GRCR is currently writing one so I’m waiting to see if my theory is correct to avoid contra rp’s
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Sorry, I was writing my rp when you posted yours, but besides Marcellus introducing himself no harm seems to have come from it.
Wait. What? Choking people?! WHAT?
Lol that was a very amusing reaction
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
im not gonna fill his rps up with my conlang, I just thought that one would be fun 🙃
I think it was kinda cool!
Oh of course! But be warned, Baron will try to kill you. *sigh*
lol.
How does this keep happening with my charries?!
In Character Party, it was Nahim and swiss cheese, in Adventure RP it’s Baron (Brutus) and…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas I would love a link to the doc! And also, I don’t care. We can probably reach the city with just one more RP, so feel free to add them in whenever.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
We have three groups in Elderstrand, if I’m not mistaking, which two do you mean?
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RAE replied to the topic Anyone Else have Book Playlists? 😉 in the forum Music 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Got it. Thanks.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Tenz and Reid
“Oh dear…I… So sorry, I do believe I’m experiencing an existential crisis. Please excuse me.”
Tenz smiled goofily at him, a gesture that came across as little creepy with Tenz’z fangs. “Don’t worry about it! I didn’t even notice! Besides, those things are easily fixed by a mechanic or a wacky inventor.…[Read more]
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