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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I’m not exactly sure if I agree with you about God ever wanting Christians to lie, but I get that you’re voicing your own beliefs and I understand why you don’t want to change it. However, just be aware that it might be a slightly controversial topic.
Anyway, I love the plot twist. Great job with the details leading up to it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
The chunky creatures loomed over them, casting shadows over the soaked ground. They walked without sight or feeling, without head movement.
Someone cried out. It was the man with wind powers. He cradled his hand, and when the other young men…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
You and me both, girl. But it looks like your world-building is paying off :]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to
Well, that’s the freakiest name for robotic machines I’ve ever heard. *Eyes you suspiciously* Have you been worldbuilding for something?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@linus-smallprint oooh awesome! and you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
a little like this but a grizzly bear instead of a polar bear, and more vicious?
(not my art)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
If you’ve ever seen the first Puss in Boots movie from Dreamworks, there’s a giant mama goose that actually does a good amount of damage to the town she invades while looking for her chick, who the main characters stole. Basing on that alone (I’ve never met a free-roaming goose, that I remember at least), I can see just an ordinary giant goose…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@linus-smallprint oh, good to know I’m not alone then! It’s not discouraging at all, it’s just one of those thoughts you have when you’re trying to sleep but your brain won’t let you. Y’know.
And I’m glad you have an explanation ready for why this section feels rushed. Makes sense.
and bruh that Canada meme! We have somethin’ like that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@grcr you’re welcome 😁
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@linus-smallprint ooh interesting!!
Alan’s character development is showing through! It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward. I was saved when I was really young and effectively don’t even remember it, so I can’t even use myself as an…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@jonas YES!
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @loopylin
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus sighed, before coughing once more. After which, he harnessed the wind once again, throwing the strong wind at the foremost figure, trying to knock it over. But nothing appeared to happen to the things. Brutus gave a cry,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@grcr very cool, and I like his name!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Are all the roleplayers allowed to deploy ironwalkers?
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whaley replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@theducktator
We’re watching the BBC version right now (cough, Challenge 2 homework, cough) and it’s pretty accurate to the book. ☺️ The newer movie isn’t too bad though either, so if that’s what you have access to, I wouldn’t dissuade you. -
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus held his drenched scarf up over his nose, his eyes shifting to the boy. He didn’t speak, he merely looked the boy up and down, before breaking out into a few coughs. Recovering himself, Brutus walked over the form of the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
We do need a plan, do we want to get out of the city?
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
Marcel cocked his head, amused, and shook his fists to loosen them back to normal. “You could have left us a couple soldiers…”
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
The BBC series XD
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I think you should send in something more powerful, cuz Brutus…To him this is all fly swatting, and I’m sorry, but I can’t drag fly swatting out
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @jonas @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, Julian, Fel, Ellis Sara, Marcellus, and the other Marcellus, our favorite neighborhood godling, Elderstrand Edge (I had fun typing that all out XD)
“You guys should make a quick plan!”
The wind around Brutus rose in int…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m so glad you’ve been drawing and coloring so much! 🤣 It’s been a couple years and we can finally see your own imaginings of your characters.
Ooh he looks like Mr. Darcy. I’m watching Pride & Prejudice right now, lol.
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