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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
BUT WHAT HAPPENED! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US ON A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT? CRUEL!!!
i can’t reveal everything! I have to save some surprises for when I post the full story!
As any of my poor charries will testify, I am very much cruel.
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Here’s your Baron scene. I’m sorry that it’s so rough.
After they had eaten, Andy took him outside, showing him about the barn, instructing him on basic duties, and telling him about the animals.
As Andy was talking about the cows, a brown horse with a white blaze trotted over to the paddock fence and whinnied. Andy…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
AHHH ELLETTE YOU SAVED THEM!!!
AND IT’S DONE!! CONGRATULATIONS!! (I know this is a later draft, but still xD)
Biggest thing I noticed, is that, in the end where Joseph and Amelia are talking, some of the things that they say, “I’m so glad that… etc.” seemed a little bit like info-dumping. It’s good for us to have all that in…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Sorry, didn’t get tagged! 😒
That does sound like fun! We always stay up till midnight too—last night we had a bunch of neighbor kids over, so we watched some YouTube videos and then played some games until midnight. I don’t think I’ve made any resolutions… but we’ll see, there’s still time.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Yeah, we didn’t either, cuz we’re going on a trip today so we didn’t want to be tired.
Also, I’m mildly jealous that you consider waking up at 6 to be ‘sleeping in’, lol 😅
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HighScribe posted an update 1 week, 3 days ago
My brother just read a 1500 page book in two days 😑
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Happy New Year! It’s 2025!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Happy Almost New Year! What are you guys up to?
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hybridlore replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Aww, your relationship with your brother sounds so sweet.
Same—we played with our stuffed animals too. We had maybe thirty of them between us, and they all belonged to a “pack” with an alpha, and a beta, etc. (Me and my sister were Erin Hunter fans.) We acted out whole storylines—probably enough to fill a novel xD.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Wow, that’s really cool. Definitely keep them in then.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle super cool!
I think my dad might have a copy of Fox’s Martyrs, but I’m not sure.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
So yeah, I will be sad, but I mostly get it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle which works for a story like yours which is, from what I can tell, supposed to be kinda like a fictionalized missionary/church history story.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Wait, you wrote the hymns? I thought you had just pasted them in. 😳
(There’s a lot of hymns I’m not familiar with, since we don’t normally sing them at my church.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
I finished! (And the art for the cover is really cool.) I gave answering those questions a shot, even though you might be past the point of feedback, I figured you might want to hear what I thought.
Were the characters believable?
For the most part, yes. At times, there was somewhat stilted (slightly forced seeming, or maybe a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
I’ve killed my fair share of teenagers….. and a few little kids……………..
Yeah, I have too, or at least not stopped such a thing in a fanfic if I’m rewriting it. but usually not a main character, and not super commonly on screen.
I mean if it’s realism, it kinda has to be done (oooof I sound so sadistic for saying that, I promi…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
but yeah I like the hymn at the back idea! maybe if you have any recipes, or games, or other things that you put an emphasis on through the story, you could add those too. If not to the main series you could have a guidebook where you put those special things + any maps you’ve made.
I honestly love those kinds of guidebooks.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
and I’m the one that briefly considered violently blinding my character who kinda needs his sight for everything.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle sorry ’bout that! Mostly I just read and enjoy the chapters. Others usually say what I have in mind.
you should be. I’m above nothing.
Executing a teenager and a pregnant woman is something even I would shy away from writing lol
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And I thought 5 days was fast.😅
Okay but that would totally be me XD
I’m a speed reader lol