@euodia-vision
Active 1 month, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
- Total Posts: 1308
-
hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Gotcha. I just meant I didn’t have much to say about the segment, but I still enjoyed reading it.
-
hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Looks good! I don’t really see anything to fix 😊
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle THAT WAS AWESOME.
I have like zero records of my family history lol. My dad is trying to find some information on his family tree, but there isn’t much to go by. I guess his ancestors didn’t keep a lot of genealogical records.
-
RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Alrighty, I finally finished reading through all of your stories for the first time. I’m gonna read through them again and then give you my thoughts, so hopefully you’ll have the results by this afternoon.
-
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @jonas @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus sighed. “If he calls for help, I will not hesitate to answer, but you must all go on. He is fighting so you can get a head start running, don’t waste it. I’m staying here to make sure he’s alright.”
-
RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
because girls think stuff is gross that guys think is funny
Oh…that honestly makes sense.
I’ll give you my thoughts when I give it to everyone else, but I think you’ll be surprised. I’m a farm girl, I’ve seen some gross things.
-
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr @loopylin @hybridlore @raxforge
Baron(Brutus)—With Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus nodded, even though he knew the strain on him would probably temporarily cripple him.
He lifted Leon from where he lay on the other rooftop first, bringing him back over to their group. He was still out cold, and…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Okay we should probably head towards the river
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Marcel doubled over to cough, and punched the wind elemental’s shoulder. It was the best way he could think of communicating friendship.
They had to find a way out of there. He got an idea, and…[Read more]
-
RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I wish this forum wasn’t mostly girls
Uh…okay. Out of the blue but okay. I don’t understand how that relates to your story but okay.
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@koshka thanks!!
-
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Yes, usually I do.
-
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Just copy and paste from the last person’s post, and then delete your name out and add the name of the last person.
Sometimes I forget that you’re relatively new to KP, XD. It feels like you’ve been here as long as I have most of the time.
I might not be a veteran KPer, but most KPer’s who at least were around for Character P…[Read more]
-
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I feel like revealing something about Baron’s back story today…
And saving Marcel too…
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr @loopylin @hybridlore
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1, Elderstramd edge
Little dots of sparkling gems set in a dark vastness. Silver sphere hung on nothing in the sky. Soft blades of short grass under…[Read more]
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Last time I checked, your characters jumped onto the boat with Rina and the rebel NPCs to escape the city. Group 1 is reasonably far off inside the city, fighting. So you are not with our group. 🙃
-
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
You’re good, lots of people are posting long sections. ;] No one minds at all, it helps to move things forward.
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
So many enemies still stood firm. But there was still hope to win, as long as everyone worked together.
Marcel took quick…[Read more]
-
RAE replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Stars! I’m not even kidding you, I have 78 notifications mostly from you guys on here. XD.
Poor Jonas. What does his notif box look like with Adventure RP?!
I’m happy that you all are enjoying yourselves, so keep it up, I just wanted to share that with you so we can all have a good laugh and you can understand why I might not reply to stuff r…[Read more]
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
here you go!
my charries confronting each other on top of a train. Inspired by the hurricane that hit Florida last month; the wind sounds reminded me of what it would be like standing on top of a fast moving vehicle such as a train, so I drew this. Then I wrote a scene for why they were confronting each other, and then I revised it a…[Read more]
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I also have the drawing I based the original scene off of if anyone wants to see it.
-
Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@everyone but @rae especially
This….barely counts as the story of a scar, or a short story. LOL.
I had a much better one in mind
but just didn’t have the drive to write it.So I pulled out a scene I had written for practice and added some extras to it, polished it down, etc.So instead of a clear, nicely written short story, you get three…[Read more]
-
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I’m sorry you and your family have to grow through this, but I’m so glad your faith is growing! Her treatment being in state is definitely a blessing! I will continue to pray for your family and that she is able to heal. Thank you for the update!! 💕💕
- Load More