@ethryndal
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
There’s exceptions to every rule. But the time jumps are less noticeable in the book than the movie/musical because there’s so much extra stuff in there.
Honestly, I think its one of those tools that can be used very well and effectively, but often isn’t.
Most certainly 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Huh, they’re all out of whack. That’s really weird.
Yeah, I think there would be people who wouldn’t enjoy your style, but once I got into it I really enjoyed it.
I have seen people do those time jumps in published books, personally I’ve never really liked it, but that could just be me. Still, I think you can make it work.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I was about to say I lived in the future, but two hours probably isn’t enough to have read a completed first draft, so I’ll just say nothing at all.
I think its pretty good. It did take me a while to get used to your writing style, but that’s probably just what I’m used to reading/writing. I’m not entirely sure about the massive jump in…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy Bye.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy @jenwriter17 If anyone wants to word war too, that would be great. (I do like these questions still. 🙂 )
@rochellaine @seekjustice @ariel-ashira @dekreel @warrenluther04 @sarah-anson
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17
That’s a hard one… For Alex it’s her wolves… But if you want a human then… maybe her grandmother or best friend, Amelia. 🙂@valtmy
Run with her wolves. 😛What does your character hate the most?
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 Yes. I noticed. 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy Well, I don’t know how productive you’ve been so I wouldn’t know. (If you wanted me to be your buddy on the Nano site, I’m on there as the same name. 🙂 )
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy @jenwriter17 Heyo! I’m here working on my Nano novel. 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Well, yes it is 😛
Also, it really doesn’t take a lot for me to get distracted.
Okay, I’ll go searching for it.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I need to do some more, since I’m rather devastatingly far behind…but you’re novel is looking very interesting at the moment (can I have the link to part 2?) and I’m up to a boring bit.
Well, a kind of boring bit. Someone gets kidnapped, but its boring before that.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I probably won’t get time for it today, but I’ll definitely get to it some day. Hopefully soon.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I would hate to see her become worse. :l
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Yes, I would think so.
However, they both (hopefully) will improve.
Are you planning on improving Myeongwol??
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I’m having a little trouble finding where I’m up to. I definitely remember the introduction to “Young Lady Kang”…
Well, I’ve found a bit I don’t remember, so I’m just going to read from there.
Oh, and I’ve just realised that the queen from my story is turning out a lot like Myeongwol and I’m not sure how I feel about that.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
By the way, how’s that other WIP of yours going? That one with the strange, captivating crown prince in it? I don’t believe I’ve read any of that one.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Would you mind sending me another link? I think that was the reason I stopped reading in the first place–because it got lost somewhere in my piles and piles of Google docs.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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