@ethryndal
Active 3 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Joy replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
By the way, I really loved your poem “Autistic”! That was really beautiful.
Thank you!! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story
Part Eight: Up a Tree
Having just hidden a Star Trek GIF, Skredder suddenly lifted her head. “Earthquake,” she simply said.
Everyone looked at her. “What?” said Valentine.
“Earthquake! An earthquake’s coming!” Skredder repeated.
“She’s right! I feel it, too!” called Catwing from a tree branch.
“But earth…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine XD I’m not particularly refined at poetry, so to me, it seems pretty great. If I think of any improvements, I’ll post them
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic *waves* hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@bekreations *facepalm* Sure, please do. I was trying to hit all the main Kapeefer foods, and somehow I missed pizza? @jane-maree would be furious.
He’s about the size of an armchair, right now. He’s quite small for a dragon.
*ducks*
OWWW
Stan, it’s the truth, okay! So–
OW OW OW OW
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Oh, I just put the italics there to let you know what the difference was. So really I meant it would look like this:
“When it threw fearsome flames at me.”
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Joy replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Well done!! I love the parable you used! 😀
The one thing I would change is instead of “When fearsome flames it threw at me,” I would say, “When it threw fearsome flames at me.” Unless you want it to be elegant, in which case feel free to ignore that suggestion 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Story Tagging in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic *waves* hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@bekreations 😀 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet. Stan, my pet dragons, says Hi.
I love fantasy too :D, and yeah, three chapters isn’t so bad. I have one story I’d like to write I can’t even get the prologue done correctly.
Looking forward to getting to know you, too. 😀 *passes our raspberries, cinnamon rolls, pancakes, and ice cream*
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing XD Wow, yeah. At least Stan doesn’t have to watch all other kinds of dragons his age whizzing around in the air like catwings do. He is kinda old to have such small wings though. I’m hoping they can improve
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic I Believe in Dragons in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Wow, great job. It’s inspiring, and adding dragons always is great 😀
Because of the dragons, I find it almost somewhat comical in nature still; it gives it a certain lightness which helps balance the introspective side.
The comparison of facing your fears to facing dragons is very fitting, too.
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Stan: It is with utmost delight of spirit and satisfaction of mind with which I attempt to greet and welcome you to the fair land of Kingdom Pen, a place where knowledge sprouts bounteously as grass and where raspberries are the esteemed delicacy of our great monarch—
Me: Umm… Stan? Why don’t we just stick with ‘hi’ for today
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Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Lol, you never know. 😀
@dekreel! NO! He’s my brother! XD
I remember him mentioning he talked to Catwing a lot and had a lot in common (or something like that). Anyway, he doesn’t know what he could have said to make you think he was her brother. XD But he’s not, he’s my brother. Hope that’s cleared up any confusion. 😉
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Catwing replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@alia It took a few pages for one of mine threads to hijacked. But I got a GIF war so it’s all good. 😀
You are welcome. Felines have been trying to tell people for years, but they just scolded us. Though sometimes they would pamper us. But we have not forgotten our mission!
Prove that one of ancestors (who’s name is long lost) discovered…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Introducing Myself in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Hm…what other questions can I ask you… are you left handed or right handed? @ariel-ashira
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Catwing replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel @dragon-snapper I’ll have you know that chairs were invented for scratching, then people used them for sitting, but later on they revolted and dragons had to be called to melt them. Just some history for you. Also that Issac Newton stole the rights of discovering gravity from a cat who’s name has long been forgotten… Because his name…[Read more]
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing I hope it’ll start cooperating soon!
Good night!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
Cool, cool.
Evyn already has elemental powers, and they’re awesome.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jessi-Rae Yay! Aah…
*frowns* my story is being most stubborner too. -
Catwing replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
@kaya-young Kay would take the mansion. She likes the city.
@that_writer_girl_99 Kay would shape shift. It would be very helpful for some of her jobs. 🙂 - Load More

