Ethryndal

@rochellaine

Ah no, I hadn’t got that post. That explains everything 🙂

No, I have no solutions. It’s driving me crazy. I’m going to see if I can find a cupcake, because I’m sure that will make me feel better.

@rochellaine

I had been right. There was the sniper, only two meters away. I opened my mouth, let out an almighty scream and then put my hand over the muzzle of the rifle.

She purposefully puts her hand over the gun. I guess she could get shot accidentally though.

The other thing is: why was she there in the first place? Delivering a letter to…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Ah, copyright…the death of bloggers everywhere. not that I don’t appreciate copyright, but you know…it is annoying.

Okay, so at the end of Stars, Sapphire dies, you know that, and she dies because she purposefully places herself in front of Justice. Now, the problem I’m seeing here is that for the past two years Sapphire has l…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I was just about to ask you if you were back yet. How’s it going? are you willing to talk through a plothole with me?

@catwing Okay, goodnight!

@seekjustice I must go to bed now. Good night.
Hopefully you can patch up those plot holes.

@catwing Oh well then, your lucky 🙂 I can imagine that they’d get tangled up though! I’m tangled in plot holes at the moment *groans and headdesks*

@seekjustice I’m not deleting them… Just moving them to be more of side characters for this book. They each have their perspectives and stories. But all the POVs got muddled and confused readers when I was swapping between six different people. 0.0

@catwing

Ah, I’m terrible at show don’t tell! And passive voice…urgh!

I have to delete a few characters from my WIP since there’s so many and quite a few are redundant. still, they’re my babies and I love them. I’m sad to see them go 🙁

@seekjustice So, so. I’m not liked editing to much and I’m having to get back into the swing of things.
But Jack is behaving. Just having trouble Showing, not Telling,
Also dealing with the hard truth that I have to change POVs in places and make a few MCs into side characters. :*(
(It will only be Alex, Jack, and Cele. Mostly…)

@catwing Cool! How’s it going?

@seekjustice It’s Finding Secrets. The one I did all those collages for. 😀

@alia Goodnight (feel better tomorrow!)

@catwing What are you editing?

@alia Yikes… Hope you feel better soon.
Good night then.

@seekjustice Welcome.

@alia @catwing

I’m here and I’m sorta editing.

@ingridrd what is her power? I really like it.
@daughteroftheking oooooh… I like it.

@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @ingridrd @daughteroftheking
I’m actually sitting down and editing my book tonight! No distractions this time! Yay! (Boo…)

@jenwriter17 Kay would jump into Niagara Falls. Not much air up there where the plane is flying.
Alex says the same.
what about your characters?

@rochellaine

Okay, see you later 🙂